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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 05, 2008, 10:34:26 pm ---And a little note to all you Readers and Commenters - you know who you are!!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/279154.html
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"Unwritten Plot List." Oh boy! I have to go find the old list - there was a slew of them! :D
Marie
louisev:
And after much thought and contemplation, chapter 14!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/279510.html
louisev:
and another!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/279748.html
mariez:
Well, that must've been some darn good thought and contemplation, Louise, b/c that was just lovely!
...and with an unusual energy, Ellery struck away from shore, swimming in long, easy strokes. Without hesitation this time, Colson followed.
Now, that's a beautiful image! And a year ago, who'd have ever thunk it? :) Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on October 11, 2008, 10:44:18 pm ---Well, that must've been some darn good thought and contemplation, Louise, b/c that was just lovely!
...and with an unusual energy, Ellery struck away from shore, swimming in long, easy strokes. Without hesitation this time, Colson followed.
Now, that's a beautiful image! And a year ago, who'd have ever thunk it? :) Thanks!
Marie
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It would seem that, when it comes to imagining those boys and their life together, a little contemplation of the passage of time seems to get the right tone in there! Which is what I am trying to do. Take my time and let the plot unfold in a more naturally-flowing manner. Sometimes in a more action-oriented plot it is easy to keep up action sequences but then the nuances are lost, and this is a story about nuances.
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