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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 11, 2008, 10:42:36 pm ---and another!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/279748.html
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Wow - you snuck another one in while I was typing!
Why do I get the feeling Jeremy is going to find out about this before Wes wants him to? Now I'm trying to think back to when Jeremy and Ellery questioned Sevigny ..... and I'm dreading the moment when Wes has to tell Ellery (and I'm sure Wes is, too!). :-\ Never a dull moment in Greenlea County (or California either)! Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on October 11, 2008, 11:02:13 pm ---Wow - you snuck another one in while I was typing!
Why do I get the feeling Jeremy is going to find out about this before Wes wants him to? Now I'm trying to think back to when Jeremy and Ellery questioned Sevigny ..... and I'm dreading the moment when Wes has to tell Ellery (and I'm sure Wes is, too!). :-\ Never a dull moment in Greenlea County (or California either)! Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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yes I did sneak another one in there! And yes, I am sure Wes is dreading ruining Ellery's vacation. However, I promised myself, and you faithful audience, that this was going to NOT be a police procedural with coitus interruptus and all that it entails! that our boys really ARE going to get a vacation they have been craving since the end of 'Long Way Home', without the interruptions of deathbed confessions, attempted murders and AIDS scares! So, Ellery and Colson have one coming to them.
louisev:
And here is Chapter 16: http://louisev.livejournal.com/280019.html
louisev:
and chapter 17!
warning: mansex
http://louisev.livejournal.com/280223.html
mariez:
Woo Wee - you've been typity typing, Louise! :D
SPOILERS
I always love Colson's ruminations and it makes a lot of sense that their day at the public beach and their upcoming visit to yet another gay bar in the strange new, open world of California would harken back memories of Adam and his days and years spent in hiding. Beautifully done.
Mansex? Uh, yeah, I'd say so. Holy crap.
How about we just crossed the Rubicon?” Colson asked, grinning happily.
LOL! You can say that again, Colson. I'm sure glad they ignored that blinking light on the phone ....
Thanks, Louise!!
Marie
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