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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
...and as promised
chapter 22: with dancing! http://louisev.livejournal.com/281397.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 08, 2008, 03:51:31 pm ---...and as promised
chapter 22: with dancing! http://louisev.livejournal.com/281397.html
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SPOILERS
Aw, poor Colson, not knowing how to dance and dying of embarrassment. But he did it! And the image of the "Saturday Night Fever" dance after he's had a few is too funny!
"Yer different. Let’s go.”
Yes, Ellery is definitely one of a kind! LOL! This is a trip Colson will never forget! ;D
Thanks, Louise.
Marie
belbbmfan:
Going to the nudist beach, dancing to 'Saturday Night Fever', I wonder what Ellery's got planned next for their holiday. I sure hope it will last a bit longer before they have to get back to real life.
And Colson is soooo adorable when he's embarassed.
„I just want ta eat you up when you blush so pretty,” Ellery said, leaning close to Colson’s ear.
Awwww, so sweet!
Thanks Louise. :)
louisev:
I had to do a lot of thinking before I posted that chapter... it's a delicate balance between Colson's desire to please his man and his social discomfort. But things will surely never be the same!
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 09, 2008, 03:54:47 pm ---I had to do a lot of thinking before I posted that chapter... it's a delicate balance between Colson's desire to please his man and his social discomfort. But things will surely never be the same!
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I think you definitely hit the right note Louise. I don't think Colson will be hitting the dance floor any time soon back home. But when you're on holiday and you've had a few drinks, things happen!
I'm very happy for them. :)
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