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Daniel:
YOUNG JACK:

**Well now, I don't mind seein' red, just don't necessarily want a lady to be wearin' it. But I'll take yer warnin' inta consideration.**

((Jack approaches the Dance Hall, feeling a little giddy about winning a rodeo tournament, even if the bull did let him win. He saunters over to the bar and orders a drink.))

%% Here is where a kind-hearted person jumps in as the Bartender in this scene. %%

louisev:
BARTENDER:

**Hey bud, what'll it be?  Ain't you the one who just won that ride out there?  You must have a passel a prize money comin to ya, so's you can order a fancy drink or sumpin.**

((Bartender obviously schmoozing for a hefty tip from the winning rider.))

Daniel:
YOUNG JACK:

((Jack's young, but he ain't innocent. He knows what the bartender's about.))

** Yeah, I'll just have a beer. Nothin' special for me tonight. I gotta save that money for something I really want.**

((Jack notices the girl in red out of the corner of his eye. She keeps looking at him and making weird faces.))

Hey, what's the matter with that girl? ((Jack nods his head toward the girl in red.))

Ray:




Who me?

Daniel:
YOUNG JACK:

**Yeah, you. But I was asking the Bartender here so he can deliver an alternative of a classic line from some movie that we all watched.**

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