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Daniel:
YOUNG JACK:

((nods to Ennis, grinning))

Yeah, once in a while, I hear you there. I mean it's not like I got a trigger-happy finger or nothin' but I like to shoot off a few rounds sometimes, just to make sure I got what it takes.... in case there's a bear or somethin'.

((shakes his head))

But to be honest, I can't shoot worth a darn. I needed someone to teach me a long time ago.

((grabs up the rifle, goes a good distance from the whisky bottle, aims, shoots, and misses))

Shit! ((looks over at Ennis)) Did ya see what I was doin' wrong?

cmr107:
YOUNG ENNIS:

Yeah, I think yer holdin' it wrong. Here, lemme show ya.

((Stands behind Jack, grabs his hands to place them on the rifle correctly.))

You wanna bring the gun up under your arm like this, then look through there to aim.

%% Shit, is this how most guys teach another guy to shoot? %%

Lynne:
JACK'S LOWER LIP:

%%Just a little nip at my corner as he closes one eye, intently concentrating...sure is hard to keep a thought with those long arms around me, steadying the 20/20.%%

Daniel:
YOUNG JACK:

((allows Ennis to hold his hands over the rifle correctly, feeling his heat advancing from behind him.))

%% I'm a bad boy, but this just feels too good! %%

Oh gawd... I mean, oh god, yeah, I see what you mean.

((his lips are suddenly dry, he licks them.))

MaineWriter:
Blue heeler arrives and says WOOF!

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