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dmmb_Mandy:
OMG!! :laugh: He will LOVE that!!
DeeDee:
You guys are awesome!! I'm loving being the audience.
welliwont:
--- Quote from: Daniel on June 19, 2006, 08:37:44 pm ---This scene is not in the original film and is slightly out of context with what has already been presented, but I think it helps get me into character and the action flowing a little.
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**Excuse me Mr Raymille? I too have an extra scene that is really needed here. May I have a word..?? Is now a good time?? No? Well this will just take a moment... really!!**
**You have never worked with me before, so you probably do not realize just how much I *become* the personage that I am portraying.... And I feel that Mr. Twist, John C. Twist Sr that is, is *much* too important to the story to wait until the last 15 mins ??? of the movie to make his first appearance. He was the father of the love interest of Ennis Del Mar, FGS! ::) Don't you think we should showcase his influence on Jack's character at the begining of the story instead of only at the end??**
**I myself have improvised this extra scene, the question is, must we get approval for any improvisations any of us may care to contribute, or can we just jump in willy-nilly whenever the spirit move us?**
**Here is the scene that I am proposing:**
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The outer door to the Twist house opened with a jerk and slammed shut with a loud bang, and Jack’s miserable old man stomped into the porch and on in to the kitchen without even wiping his boots on the mat.
"Where the hell is that boy when I need ‘im???" he bellered.
"I been waitin’ for him to get his sorry ass outa bed for four fuckin’ hours! Always keeepin’ me waitin’! How the hell can he still be laying abed at this time of the day? ‘N I don’t see his truck outside, has he done drove it into a ditch again?"
His poor browbeaten wife turned to him, wiping her floury hands on her flowery apron….
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**(now here is where Mrs. Twist has to improvise her line.)**
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Well Mr. Raymille, do you like it? hunh? I really hope you do... :D
Jane (aka JakeTwist, playing the part of John C. Twist, as approved by Elle). ;D ;D
Pipedream:
** A new day has begun on the set of "Broken Arsed Mountain." Yeehaw!! **
** Let's get some exercise before the action! ** ;D
vkm91941:
**I'm really gonna miss Ennis this 4th of July but I met this really nice girl Kirsten, her ex-boyfriend Jake, I mean Jack is trying to get a job up on that mountain too. We went shopping found these really cute outfits. SEEEEEE Guess we girls will just have to watch the fireworks together**
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