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Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 4102126 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9380 on: May 23, 2007, 08:30:14 am »
Hello everyone,

Chapter 50. Missing

http://louisev.livejournal.com/15191.html

A chapter with a memorable last line:

“Shit, boy, that was great,” Colson said, reaching for the box of cigars that lay on the coffee table.

“Good movie, wasn’t it?” Ellery replied.

Enjoy!

Leslie
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9381 on: May 23, 2007, 12:11:01 pm »
Quote from: MaineWriter on May 23, 2007, 08:30:14 am

“Good movie, wasn’t it?” Ellery replied. 

Yes, indeedy, Ellery!  Definitely need repeat viewings.   ;D

Marie
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9382 on: May 23, 2007, 04:15:21 pm »
Another chapter!

Chapter 51. Breakfast With The Doughboy

http://louisev.livejournal.com/15463.html



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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9383 on: May 25, 2007, 06:54:51 am »
Just in time for lunch for our European readers, just in time for breakfast for those in the US, and for yb in Hong Kong, a dinnertime treat!

Chapter 52. Back at the Stallion

http://louisev.livejournal.com/15620.html

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9384 on: May 25, 2007, 08:21:32 am »
gee I guess I finally timed things correctly!

Please feel free to post feedback, however, you may notice that in this particular area of the story, very little has changed outside of copyediting.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9385 on: May 25, 2007, 12:43:24 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on May 25, 2007, 08:21:32 am
gee I guess I finally timed things correctly!

Please feel free to post feedback, however, you may notice that in this particular area of the story, very little has changed outside of copyediting.

As long as you keep writing and editing, the timing can never be incorrect.   :)

Interesting reading this knownig that Colson has a legbone growing in his ear even as they speak  :-\ - but I kind of like the way they are grumbling at each other.  It shows a degree of familiarity and comfort.

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9386 on: May 26, 2007, 09:02:50 am »
Morning everyone,

Chapter 53. Overdoing It

http://louisev.livejournal.com/16004.html

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9387 on: May 26, 2007, 01:03:44 pm »
Quote from: MaineWriter on May 26, 2007, 09:02:50 am
Morning everyone,

Chapter 53. Overdoing It

http://louisev.livejournal.com/16004.html

Evening Leslie and Louise!

Quote from: MaineWriter on May 26, 2007, 09:02:50 am
Enjoy!

Leslie

I did, thanks.  :)
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9388 on: May 28, 2007, 08:19:20 am »
Good morning all!

A classic chapter for this holiday day...

Chapter 54. Wild Bronc

http://louisev.livejournal.com/16211.html

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #9389 on: May 29, 2007, 07:40:15 am »
Hello everyone,

Chapter 55. Irregularities

http://louisev.livejournal.com/16519.html

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