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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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MaineWriter:
Any comments, anyone?

L

mariez:
Here I am!   :)

"But he was having difficulty now, and wasn’t sure what was going to happen if Bill really did get out of his truck and attack Ellery. If Colson were to really lose his temper – Bill could be in real danger."

Uh oh - sounds like there's a story in there somewhere.  I think that there are going to be some very revealing conversations between Colson and Ellery when they gradually start relating more and more of their past histories. 

So Colson lost his mother when he was young and had an older sister - but I don't remember hearing anything about his father yet.  Hmmm.....

Being carried off to a steaming bath by your lover . . . ahhhh  - now that's a tension reliever! 

Looking forward to the barbecue - and Edna! 

Thanks,
Marie

P.S.  Have I mentioned that I love Reynolds?  Every office needs a Reynolds.   :)

MaineWriter:
Chapter 64. Out in Public

http://louisev.livejournal.com/18822.html

Good conversation chapter, and a reminder of the girl on the butter! LOL

L

MaineWriter:
Chapter 65. Chief Deputy

Wes is having a barbecue and we are all invited!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/19195.html

Enjoy!

Leslie

mariez:
Yep, great - and much needed - conversation in Chapter 64.

And from Chapter 65, this cracks me up no matter how many times I read it:

“Ellery Cantrell, I been married to the Sheriff fer forty years, you don’t think I know what fuck means?” The woman smiled primly, thoroughly enjoying Ellery’s blush of embarrassment.

 :laugh:  Edna is probably one of the very few people who can make Ellery blush! 

Thanks,
Marie

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