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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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louisev:
you bet she is!

that's Edna's job!

MaineWriter:
Hello everyone!

Chapter 66. Normal

http://louisev.livejournal.com/19209.html

More goings on at the barbecue...

L

MaineWriter:
A double scoop of chapters, first thing on Friday...

Chapter 67. Monkey Wrench

http://louisev.livejournal.com/19507.html

Enjoy!

L

mariez:

--- Quote from: MaineWriter on June 08, 2007, 06:25:17 am ---A double scoop of chapters, first thing on Friday... 
--- End quote ---

Mmmmm .... and I just licked them right up!  :)

"Colson nodded, feeling a thrill of happiness in his chest. He had gotten through the barbecue, enjoyed the jollity and festive air surrounding Ellery’s colleagues and friends, the good food and beer, and found himself noticing once more that everything felt normal. Perhaps it was that he was breaking out of his long isolation, his hermit’s life, and the days he had spent with Ellery, gradually loosened him from his solitude, that he could quietly enjoy others around him talking without having to do more than nod, smile, and occasionally laugh at a particularly sharp witted joke, usually delivered by Ellery or Wes."

Aww, this made me so happy, but yet the thought that Colson has spent so much time feeling "abnormal" is so heartbreaking. . .


And it's great to see Murdoch in Chapter 67:

Murdoch glanced up soberly at Colson. “We don’t file em under whether they got rust or not sir.”

I love that guy - he sure does come up with some great lines sitting in that fishbowl - reminds me of his recent encounter with Jeremy and Nick.   :laugh:

Thanks, L&L
Marie

MaineWriter:
Louise is traveling, but that doesn't mean she is not working!

Chapter 68. Panic

http://louisev.livejournal.com/19848.html

Enjoy!

L

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