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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
Oooooh boy....
Chapter 69. Something To Hold On To
http://louisev.livejournal.com/20147.html
L
louisev:
Marie,
I am always grateful for your comments... I never particularly thought of Murdoch as a comedy relief, but something about your comment sort of reminded me / oh yeah, that is kind of funny.
heheh
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on June 11, 2007, 10:10:45 am ---Oooooh boy....
Chapter 69. Something To Hold On To
http://louisev.livejournal.com/20147.html
L
--- End quote ---
Ooooooh boy, indeed!
HAWT damn Louise, that was great!
mariez:
From Chapter 68:
". . .radiating disapproval and then banging the gavel and announcing to everyone present, including strangers, that he had not done right by his family, and his obligation to his daughters was merely to pay for their support."
"Not done right by his family" can mean so many things - is this more Colson backstory to be revealed . . . and "merely to pay for their support" also has an unsettling tone . . .
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on June 11, 2007, 01:15:26 pm ---
Ooooooh boy, indeed!
HAWT damn Louise, that was great!
--- End quote ---
Yep - what she said! ;D
Thanks L&L,
Marie
MaineWriter:
Lots of things go on in this chapter...
Chapter 70. Negotiating
http://louisev.livejournal.com/20393.html
Enjoy!
L
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