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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
Awww now, see I wish I could have written another chapter, but I went into emergency mode after some extremely unexpected bad news on my first full day in Chicagoland.
See my blog for details. It's almost 9 p.m. and I'm yawning to beat the band! Hopefully I'll have a home tomorrow sometime and I'll have some nibbles on new job opportunities to keep me settled enough so I can write the next chapter then!
louisev:
okey doke, now that I have settled a few things, and have a home to look forward to, I managed to get my concentration back... and here is chapter 80!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/308697.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 27, 2009, 11:35:51 pm ---okey doke, now that I have settled a few things, and have a home to look forward to, I managed to get my concentration back... and here is chapter 80!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/308697.html
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SPOILERS
Well, things are moving along quickly now! Esteban adds a very interesting dynamic to the sheriff's office - and to the story. He's in a very awkward position on a lot of levels. (And I have to agree with him - hospitals really aren't for "sittin around visitin.") Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
and let the party resume!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/308834.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 28, 2009, 10:04:43 pm ---
and let the party resume!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/308834.html
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SPOILERS
Now that is one party that only this particular blend of characters could put together!
I could tell ya what’s been happenin over at the bar, that’d satisfy yer curiosity,” Wayne offered brightly.
“Lemme guess, yer breedin an army a mice ta invade the secret Brotherhood HQ up in the White Mountains an they’re gonna go chew off all their –“
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: So funny! You've got it all there - a bit of irony, a lot of banter, along with a nice bit of farce, too - except that you're not exaggerating these people at all. They're just being themselves! I love that the Fearless Leader stops being fearless when it comes to Edna! Thanks, Louise!
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