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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
I take it that twist in the plot was a surprise!
muah hahahahah. Something in me just loves doing that.
louisev:
And onward to the main subject
Chapter 96: http://louisev.livejournal.com/312577.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on June 15, 2009, 09:37:33 pm ---And onward to the main subject
Chapter 96: http://louisev.livejournal.com/312577.html
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SPOILERS
Colson wandered to the window, pushed aside the curtain and looked out toward the water feeder. There were two red hummingbirds there now, and he ached to return to his comfortable seat on the patio, or go out to try to find a camera that would allow him to zoom in on the tiny creatures as they fluttered like tiny windmills, holding themselves perfectly still as they sipped with sharp bills at the flower-shaped water troughs.
Oh, that's lovely! From the first moment Colson spotted those birds in Ellery's yard, I have always loved watching the relationship he's developed with them and how that allows him not just an escape valve from his worries, but also let's him tap into his inherent connection with nature. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on June 16, 2009, 09:52:05 am ---SPOILERS
Colson wandered to the window, pushed aside the curtain and looked out toward the water feeder. There were two red hummingbirds there now, and he ached to return to his comfortable seat on the patio, or go out to try to find a camera that would allow him to zoom in on the tiny creatures as they fluttered like tiny windmills, holding themselves perfectly still as they sipped with sharp bills at the flower-shaped water troughs.
Oh, that's lovely! From the first moment Colson spotted those birds in Ellery's yard, I have always loved watching the relationship he's developed with them and how that allows him not just an escape valve from his worries, but also let's him tap into his inherent connection with nature. Thanks, Louise!
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Colson's going to be developing some new hobbies with his man in a sickbed!!
As you might imagine, I have some experience in watching hummingbirds - I especially love the red ones that flutter around those water feeders!
louisev:
and now, back to Memorial ! Chapter 97
http://louisev.livejournal.com/312876.html
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