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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale

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louisev:

--- Quote from: mariez on June 29, 2009, 09:04:08 pm ---Holy shit, Louise!  Now my imagination is working overtime!   :laugh:


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if you ever guess who else is going to show up I will personally give you the Ellery Cantrell Mystery Plot Twist Award of the Century.

mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on June 29, 2009, 11:30:55 pm ---if you ever guess who else is going to show up I will personally give you the Ellery Cantrell Mystery Plot Twist Award of the Century.

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 :laugh: :laugh: Okay, now I'm really racking my brain!!!!  Let's see.... Wes and Edna wouldn't be a surprise...Wayne was just there and he wouldn't be too much of a surprise either.... Lauren?  could Beagle show up out of the blue?  How about a pregnant Laura and/or her husband? Larry Esteban, Jr.?  Couldn't be Lago himself... or the mystery man from Tuscon...  Fuckin Bill is still in prison....  no, wait, wait ---- Didn't Sampson's nurse mention sending a visiting nurse for morphine shots?  Don't tell me the blonde nurse Jeremy used to date will show up - what was her name - Janice?  The one who was sitting outside his apartment watching Jeremy and Nicky?  I suppose Paula's girlfriend could've flown in b/c she was concerned, but she would go to the hospital, not to Ellery's ...................jeez, I've thrown everything in there but the kitchen sink and I'm sure I'm still missing something.....I'll keep thinking!

louisev:
OMG!

One of your guesses is correct!  You win!

louisev:
And here is chapter 108:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/315708.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on June 30, 2009, 08:23:47 pm ---OMG!

One of your guesses is correct!  You win!

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OMG!  You are kidding!!!!!   I'm dusting off a shelf for my award!   :laugh:   Running off to read .....


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OMG again!   :laugh: :laugh:  I honestly thought that was just a wild long-shot!!!  Man oh man, if Jeremy thought he was having a bad day before .........  This is terrific, Louise - thanks!

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