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louisev:
...and on special request!

chapter 60!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/338097.html

mariez:
SPOILERS








Whew!!!! All caught up.  So... how many times can I say "OH MY GOD!" and "WTF?" and "WESLEY, WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG YOU WITH YOU?" (Is his imminent heart attack cutting off the supply of blood to his brain?)  Holy Moly.  Nicky had the best line: Is the fucked-upness ever gonna end?” And when did Nick get a sister? I hope this means we'll be delving more deeply into Nicky and Jeremy and the Sampson clan! There are probably a thousand tales right there! LOL.

It sounds like Joe and Jeremy and Edna are the only ones left with full brain capacity. Holy Shit, Louise!!!

Mind-blowing "final" chapter? You mean MORE mind-blowing?  :laugh:  Obviously, I'm with the chorus that's begging and sniveling!  Thanks, Louise!

louisev:
Oh yeah... it's going to get worse.

And the line "I'm goin ta Tahiti!"is going to echo a few more times before the rest of the shots are fired.

Oh wait did I just give the plot away?

GREAT to see you again Marie!

And yes there will be more today!  I've got an event to go to, I'm halfway done with the next chapter of "Hermes"and I've got a relaxing rest-of-the-weekend with gorgeous weather to keep me encouraged!

louisev:
and as promised!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/338393.html  Chapter 61

louisev:
Late night stealth chapter 62!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/338551.html

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