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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
SPOILERS
Have I already said, "Oh my God!"? Doesn't matter - OH MY GOD!!!!!!! Poor Colson - but thank god he was there. And, of course, we know that he's as good a shot (or better, lol) than Ellery! And speaking of Ellery ... what the hell will his reaction be? And what about Wayne? I hope he doesn't try to kiss Colson again . . . lol. Good Lord, and on top of everything else!
And now we have reporters swarming all over the diswasher dead guy - which I guess is better than having them swarm over the dead mayor!
I'm expecting a swarm of locusts any time now! Damn - this is one helluva tale, Louise - thanks!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 23, 2010, 12:40:22 pm ---SPOILERS
Have I already said, "Oh my God!"? Doesn't matter - OH MY GOD!!!!!!! Poor Colson - but thank god he was there. And, of course, we know that he's as good a shot (or better, lol) than Ellery! And speaking of Ellery ... what the hell will his reaction be? And what about Wayne? I hope he doesn't try to kiss Colson again . . . lol. Good Lord, and on top of everything else!
And now we have reporters swarming all over the diswasher dead guy - which I guess is better than having them swarm over the dead mayor!
I'm expecting a swarm of locusts any time now! Damn - this is one helluva tale, Louise - thanks!
--- End quote ---
and did I mention - it gets worse? Whoops I'm giving the plot away. And you are QUITE welcome, Marie! GREAT to see you again! stay tuned for more "Agents" tonight!
louisev:
okay, next chapter is half done. I just need a nap again before I finish it.
louisev:
and finally here it is!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/338893.html#cutid1
louisev:
I just made the final push on getting the final edits into "Tourmaline" and after I've slept, I will be resuming "Agents" in the next chapter as we creep toward the spine-tingling finale!
Will Little Nell Wayne die? Will Dr. Sampson survive surgery? Will Dr. Boudreau survive the next encounter with the now-exceptionally-ornery Ellery Cantrell, private citizen? Will Joe succeed in heading Ellery off at the pass before he flies to Tahiti? Will Colson go with him or talk some sense into him? Will Katie get arraigned on assault charges? Will Reynolds find out who put the body in the dishwasher?
And - perhaps most importantly - IS LEWIS STEVENS REALLY DEAD?
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