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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
SPOILERS
Holy crap, I can't believe I missed that last chapter! My life is as crazy as Ellery's and Colson's (slight exaggeration - but only slight ::)).
Mistake, mistake, mistake.
You can say that a fourth and fifth time, Carol! Sheesh.
“Carol, I’m a lawyer. I know how not to talk myself into a corner.”
:laugh: Famous last words - but I see Carol refrained from pointing out the irony for the moment.
--- Quote from: louisev on April 06, 2010, 09:18:41 pm ---I just made the final push on getting the final edits into "Tourmaline" and after I've slept, I will be resuming "Agents" in the next chapter as we creep toward the spine-tingling finale!
Will Little Nell Wayne die? Will Dr. Sampson survive surgery? Will Dr. Boudreau survive the next encounter with the now-exceptionally-ornery Ellery Cantrell, private citizen? Will Joe succeed in heading Ellery off at the pass before he flies to Tahiti? Will Colson go with him or talk some sense into him? Will Katie get arraigned on assault charges? Will Reynolds find out who put the body in the dishwasher?
And - perhaps most importantly - IS LEWIS STEVENS REALLY DEAD?
--- End quote ---
"Little Nell" :laugh: :laugh: OMG, Louise, cue the organ music! ;D Just terrific storytelling! Thanks!
ifyoucantfixit:
That was a perfectly coined name for our dear Wayne. He has been the largest portion of the humor in this story.
I hate to think that he won't continue to provide Ellery with the aggravation that all children give their parents. The
smack downs that Colson has the chance for, that gives him the opportunity to release the pent up energy and
rage that he carries, from his three kids. The girls and his most spoiled one of all. His dear Ellery. My point is
that he is a key in this story like not many others.
louisev:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on April 07, 2010, 01:34:57 pm ---
That was a perfectly coined name for our dear Wayne. He has been the largest portion of the humor in this story.
I hate to think that he won't continue to provide Ellery with the aggravation that all children give their parents. The
smack downs that Colson has the chance for, that gives him the opportunity to release the pent up energy and
rage that he carries, from his three kids. The girls and his most spoiled one of all. His dear Ellery. My point is
that he is a key in this story like not many others.
--- End quote ---
very true, if Colson is a parental figure here, then Ellery is his most troubled child :)
louisev:
Working on the next chapter as we speak. Ironically, I suppose, the minute Ellery gets off morphine, I get a prescription for it!
I guess it's to have the full PO-lice experience!
louisev:
And thar she blows!!!
Chapter 64:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/339171.html
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