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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 14, 2009, 01:05:10 pm ---
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Sansone's story about his daughter is heartbreaking. But it looks like he may be able to provide Joe with some valuable information.
“An I got ta leave early,” she said sheepishly.
Ahh, another hot date, Carol? ;D And it looks like things could get ugly if Joe gets back late! Thanks, Louise.
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She ain't tellin!
Any guesses on what Reynolds was doing in the Gents?
louisev:
chapter 16!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/325135.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 16, 2009, 01:44:32 am ---chapter 16!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/325135.html
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Oh my. I hate to say this, and as much as I hate physical violence, Katie Ann is sitting on my last nerve. She calls Ellery - who is recovering from a serious injury - because her mother slapped her? And why was she so pissed off when Laura said it was different for Katie Ann to march down and confront the "other woman"? And, I don't know, was little Stevie really her motivation for going to Prescott anyway? I think her embarrassment over Jeremy was a bigger factor. I feel sorry little Stevie most of all.
Maybe I'm just in a crappy mood, but she needs to sit and have a cold soft drink somewhere, calm herself down, act like a freaking adult for once and head back home. I'm tired of these damsel in distress calls to Ellery and her dad. They went through enough of that nonsense when she was breaking up with Bud. And I haven't forgotten how she blew things out of proportion then. :-\
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 16, 2009, 02:43:12 pm ---SPOILERS
Oh my. I hate to say this, and as much as I hate physical violence, Katie Ann is sitting on my last nerve. She calls Ellery - who is recovering from a serious injury - because her mother slapped her? And why was she so pissed off when Laura said it was different for Katie Ann to march down and confront the "other woman"? And, I don't know, was little Stevie really her motivation for going to Prescott anyway? I think her embarrassment over Jeremy was a bigger factor. I feel sorry little Stevie most of all.
Maybe I'm just in a crappy mood, but she needs to sit and have a cold soft drink somewhere, calm herself down, act like a freaking adult for once and head back home. I'm tired of these damsel in distress calls to Ellery and her dad. They went through enough of that nonsense when she was breaking up with Bud. And I haven't forgotten how she blew things out of proportion then. :-\
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Yeppers. She is truly her mother's daughter! The drama, the drama!
louisev:
And now, back to the sickroom...!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/325754.html Chapter 17
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