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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
and back at the Brown Horse Ranch:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324711.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
“She keeps... movin stuff around...” Wes muttered....
:laugh: Even funnier that Colson called him on it! I imagine, though, that Edna is just as happy that the division of labor be strictly adhered to in the Brown household!
That sleepy smile and easygoing rapport with Wes charmed him, though, and Colson could feel himself want to say something, to add to the conversation... or to ask about the mare. Maybe there would be time to talk to him when he re-examined her. Wes had retreated to his study, and Colson found himself feeling awkward and ashamed...
Aw, Colson. I found this very touching and sweet. He's still coming to terms with things - and the compulsory celibacy while Ellery is recuperating is making matters worse. Glad he was at the ranch so that he and Nellie could have their "talk." Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
And you know DANG WELL that Edna hasn't moved anything around for YEARS! He just probably hasn't opened a cabinet in that long!
Yes, our old friend Wes just -- being Wes!
I love writing about Colson's relationship with his horses, which sort of puts a bug in my ear to write more of that. I spent 15 years with horses and there were a great number of private conversations!
louisev:
And the plot deepens...
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324931.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 13, 2009, 11:03:18 pm ---
And the plot deepens...
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324931.html
--- End quote ---
SPOILERS
Sansone's story about his daughter is heartbreaking. But it looks like he may be able to provide Joe with some valuable information.
“An I got ta leave early,” she said sheepishly.
Ahh, another hot date, Carol? ;D And it looks like things could get ugly if Joe gets back late! Thanks, Louise.
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