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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
And... chapter 13! As the stomach churns!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324362.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
“Don’t you just think it’d be so romantic, if they’d just break up with each other an date us instead?
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: OMG, I can't stand it! The Twins of Delusion!
I wouldn’t mind if Nick went off with a man now an again, as long as he paid enough attention ta me,” Pam said.
The chances of Nick giving Pam that kind of "attention" are about the same as the chances that Ellery has sex fantasies about women! A big fat ZERO. And, btw, Pam - that whole going off with a man now an again thing - how they'd work out with your PARENTS? Good grief.
But I wonder what's up with Laura and why she won't go to the doctor .....
“I know. Ya didn’t need ta hear that. It’s the Percodan.”
:laugh: Good excuse, Ellery!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 11, 2009, 01:38:53 pm ---SPOILERS
“Don’t you just think it’d be so romantic, if they’d just break up with each other an date us instead?
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: OMG, I can't stand it! The Twins of Delusion!
I wouldn’t mind if Nick went off with a man now an again, as long as he paid enough attention ta me,” Pam said.
The chances of Nick giving Pam that kind of "attention" are about the same as the chances that Ellery has sex fantasies about women! A big fat ZERO. And, btw, Pam - that whole going off with a man now an again thing - how they'd work out with your PARENTS? Good grief.
But I wonder what's up with Laura and why she won't go to the doctor .....
“I know. Ya didn’t need ta hear that. It’s the Percodan.”
:laugh: Good excuse, Ellery!
--- End quote ---
Yeah, how DID that work out for Pam and Katy Ann's parents? But you know the old saw, that women don't see men as they are, they see them as they'll be after the makeover! "I can change him!" In that respect they aren't a whole lot different than their momma!!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 11, 2009, 02:55:43 pm ---Yeah, how DID that work out for Pam and Katy Ann's parents? But you know the old saw, that women don't see men as they are, they see them as they'll be after the makeover! "I can change him!" In that respect they aren't a whole lot different than their momma!!
--- End quote ---
Oh, absolutely! For all the complaining they do about Laura, neither of them realize some of the patterns that they're following - sad, but very believable.
louisev:
Sorry... no time to write tonight! But i was sure thinking about things!!!
I am sure something will - er, erupt - tomorrow.
Question for ponderers: what was Reynolds doing in the Gents?
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