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Dreaming by Cathalin
Lumière:
Jane ~ Cheers for posting that. I think it is a great idea to start a thread for BelgianBoy's stuff! :)
Ok..some DREAMING SPOILERS follow............
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I just finished reading Chapter 13 and 14 last night, and by the time I got to the end of Chapter 14, I was dying to see Jack get his ass from Childress to Lightnin Flat to be with Ennis. I thought it was very interesting that Jack was the one giving up at that point. Quite the role reversal, Ennis was pleading .. "Please don't tell me to leave" (breaking my heart :'( ) and Jack going "My mind is made up, you have to go" .. It's Jack's turn to feel the deep fear for the men wielding tire-irons, that was quite the interesting twist.
I also loved reading about Francine and Alma's visit! That was so sweet and heartwarming .. even sourpuss Pa Twist managed to be a little useful! ;)
Any thoughts, comments?
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Lucise on August 10, 2006, 11:46:35 am ---Jane ~ Cheers for posting that. I think it is a great idea to start a thread for BelgianBoy's stuff! :)
Ok..some DREAMING SPOILERS follow............
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I just finished reading Chapter 13 and 14 last night, and by the time I got to the end of Chapter 14, I was dying to see Jack get his ass from Childress to Lightnin Flat to be with Ennis. I thought it was very interesting that Jack was the one giving up at that point. Quite the role reversal, Ennis was pleading .. "Please don't tell me to leave" (breaking my heart :'( ) and Jack going "My mind is made up, you have to go" .. It's Jack's turn to feel the deep fear for the men wielding tire-irons, that was quite the interesting twist.
I also loved reading about Francine and Alma's visit! That was so sweet and heartwarming .. even sourpuss Pa Twist managed to be a little useful! ;)
Any thoughts, comments?
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I also liked the fact that Mr. Twist finally showed some humanity, and it took a visit from Ennis' girls to bring out his tender side. Perhaps Old man Twist would have been a better parent to females? I'm aching to find out how Ennis is going to convince Jack to let him stay. I think I have an idea! ::)
littleguitar:
--- Quote ---Quite the role reversal, Ennis was pleading .. "Please don't tell me to leave" (breaking my heart ) and Jack going "My mind is made up, you have to go" ..
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This broke my heart too, it was unexpected in so many ways and I love how much Ennis has come to love the idea of him and Jack living in that little house. I don't think I could handle it if Jack decides not to stay with him... and I definitely don't think Ennis could at that point :'(
welliwont:
yeah, well I still swear by the first half of chapter 12! ;) ;D ;D
Spoilers for Dreaming Chapters 13 and 14 below...
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Chapter 13 and 14 brought me down a little, and sad to say that there are only two chapters left to come, and then an epilogue. I thoulght it was sweet how Jack phoned from the road, and was oh so scared that Ennis was gonna pack it in and he was so vulnerable to his Ma, and she in turn was so sweet to Ennis. :-* That part was good. But the twist after that, on Jack's part, hmmm, I hope things torque back pretty damn quick!
J
Lumière:
Re: Chapter 12:
I was panting through the entire love scene at Devil's tower .. sweating like a pig I was, :laugh: but i loved every dripping ounce of it! Phew...
I read it again few days ago.. and again another time before that.. ;)
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