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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!

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littleguitar:
Chapter 17 (final chapter  :'( )

I hope you enjoy!

http://minchout.livejournal.com/15461.html

RouxB:
Lovely ending Mandy. Enough resolved but not everything tied up into a neat little package. Well done.

mvansand76:
Hi Mandy!

The last chapter!  :'( I loved how you ended it with the shirts... Your dialogue is great and it was good to read that Jack was able to comfort Ennis now by holding him. How is Jack ever gonna get the divorce papers? Oh I forgot, this is the last chapter!  ;)
I wish that Jack would've stayed in Bobby's bed though. I think Bobby was acting tough when he said that and still needed his daddy with him. And sex right next to the little boy? Ouch! I don't know about that!  :o

It was a great story, I think I need to read it again from start to finish!

Mel

Bigheart:

--- Quote from: mvansand76 on December 31, 2006, 05:43:23 am ---I wish that Jack would've stayed in Bobby's bed though. I think Bobby was acting tough when he said that and still needed his daddy with him. And sex right next to the little boy? Ouch! I don't know about that!  :o


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I kind of wished that too! I think it would have been really good for Bobby to snuggle up against his father  :) Heh and the sex, well I guess they really needed each other at that moment but I think I would have gone into the shower or something!  ;D

Thanks for this beautiful story, Mandy  :) I'm really sorry to see it end  :'( I've loved it so much for such a long time but you ended it beautifully and I thank you for that   :-*

littleguitar:
I was wondering if anyone would say anything about that sex scene... I knew it would make a few people shudder. I'm with you, I don't think that it was the best move to make and yeah I think Bobby probably did need his dad at that point, even if he was the one to say something. I really don't have any explaination other than I think there was just so much tension after everything that happened that neither one of them could resist... they weren't thinking. I actually wrote a shower sex scene but it felt wrong... I don't know, I just kept thinking Bobby would wonder what they were getting up to in the shower together so I might as well go with my initial instinct and have them just wait till he's asleep.

(also, I find quiet sex incredibly erotic  ::) )  :P

Thanks for the kind words everyone, I hope this last chapter wasn't too much of a let down. A few people didn't seem to expect it to end and I know that there is a lot that I didn't tie up.  :-\

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