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Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
mvansand76:
Oh I loved this chapter so much, I was grinning like a fool through it all! I hate Daniel, especially for saying that to Ennis, that guy is one sore loser if you ask me! Damn! >:(
Beatrice:
Here's today's Teaser!
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All he wanted was some non-green Jell-O.
Red or yellow or blue or...I like orange...orange is good. Nana Spencer always made me orange...liked going to Nana and Papa Spencer's...took me fishing and let me use a hammer and stay up past my bedtime and...He wasn't...orange in that white bowl with blue flowers on the...and Cool Whip...Cool Whip...Cool Whip makes everything good...pie and cookies and cherry cake and...but not green...not even Cool Whip can make green...tastes awesome right out of the container, big spoonfuls...two...three...can't let mom see me 'cause she'd get...if He catches me, belt for sure, beat me so hard I...I hate green...that's the only color they had, that other place, that other hospital, nurses bringing me green all the time...green, green, green...only there because He...so mad He broke...told me to lie, or it would happen again...so, I did, but it did again...and again...and again... and no chunks...chunks are gross, chunks feel weird in my mouth, chunks get caught in my throat, chunks stick in my braces...even bananas are gross...bananas belong in pudding and Cheerio's, not Jell-O...just Jell-o...just non-green Jell-O...and Ennis.
"Mr. Twist?"
"What's...left of..me."
Non-green Jell-o and Ennis...and cool whip...oh...Ennis and Cool Whip...Ennis wearing just Cool Whip...me eating Cool Whip right off...wait for it...wait for it...wait for...damn...morphine kills pain and boners.
"OK, I'm just here to check on your IV's."
Want Ennis, even with no Cool Whip...even with no non-green...not this guy...this guy's too short...too skinny...no ass...has it been fifteen...feels like hours since...how long does it take to get up here from...shit.
"You might feel a little sting for a moment."
Ennis was...and Daniel was...having some fly on the wall envy here...bet Ennis kicked his - "Wait...what're you...doing to...my -"
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See youse tomorrow! (I hope)
B
mariez:
Thanks for the teaser, B - you had my emotions flying all over the place! Really terrific as always.
The short, skinny guy with no ass better keep his hands off Jack's Batman boxers! Hurry, Ennis!
Can't wait for more!
Marie
belbbmfan:
Look! It's tomorrow already! ;)
Thanks for the teaser B, you do know how to make me hit the refresh button endlessly.. :)
cathyinaz:
It sounds like someone is trying to Overdose Jack on his IV meds. :o Ennis better forget chasing the bad guy and check on Jack.
Sweet Jack was so abused, I wish Ennis knew how fragile he is. Maybe the Sarge can have a little talk with Jacks dad during family Christmas. :(
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