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Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
Beatrice:
A voice cries from the RL wilderness...Teaser Time!
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“Goddamnit!” Who knew, who knew where Jack was supposed to be?
Shouts in the otherwise subdued and relatively mundane world of a med/surg floor had enticed the curiously bored to each open door, caretaker and cared for alike forming two parallel lines of potential targets.
“Everybody! Back in your rooms!” The staff, here and ER…
The authority and urgency was quite apparent in the voice, yet the possible casualties were still reluctant to relinquish their vicarious claim on this rare piece of excitement.
“Damnit! BACK IN YOUR ROOMS!” And Daniel…and Herman…
Perhaps it was civic duty that pricked their consciouses into action, or the sight of a single man barreling down the hall had a very short shelf life - crazed cop with gun or no - that sent the rubberneckers scurrying to safety. More than likely, though, it was Ennis’ over the head, over exaggerated weapon cocking and the whiz of a series of bullets flying that missed his head by a whisper.
…and the whole fucking hospital ‘cause I shouted it across the waiting - “Fuck!”
An off-beat and frantic rhythm of slamming doors, all gone to ground except –
“You!” A feminine figure in white froze, her retreat hesitating a moment too long, and mid-flight, Ennis latched on to a thin arm, dragging the unfortunate nurse along with. Hunnie had no time, no time to… “I'm Sgt. Del Mar. Come with me!”
“Sir – what – I – too – what – please – don’t – I -” her confused stammering as disjointed as her frightened stumbling, “Stop – you - hurting – please -”
“Here! A pause only to shove his cargo at the door of 722. “Check on Jack!” Jack is fine, Jack is OK, Jack, please, please be… Then back to the chase.
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I WILL see youse guys tomorrow!
B
ifyoucantfixit:
Like i said,, mean mean and hateful wench,,,but i love mean and spiteful wenches, of which i am proud to be one,,,,see ya tamarrow......hehehhe
janice
mariez:
Holy Crap, B!!! That went beyond teasing. Janice is right - you are evil! :laugh:
We love ya, B. Can't wait for tonight!
Thanks!
Marie
cwby30:
Evenin'.
She's teasin' us like the old trailer at the afternoon matinee for the next chapter in the Western serial. The good guy is in the wagon, knocked out by the bad guy, the horses have somehow slipped the harnesses and run free, and the wagon is careening towards the cliff! Oh, no! But, wait...the other good guy and best friend to the first good guy is riding hell bent for leather towards the wagon. Will he get there in time to save his best friend?! Will the bad guy get his just rewards?! Will they live happily ever after? [Wait, that didn't happen in Westerns. Darn. Well, here it can.] See you next week, kids!!
Can't wait that long! Will tomorrow never come?!
belbbmfan:
Look what i found! :)
http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/12173.html#cutid1
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