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White Picket Fences and Apple Trees
belbbmfan:
Thanks for the link Marie. What a great way to start the day! :)
It's so good to have this story back!
I loved this:
'Ennis felt like he should say more, but he didn’t know what. He cleared his throat and just decided to jump in. “Missed you, you know. Um, when you went to your aunt’s.” He looked at his feet. He had a hole in his sock and his toe was poking out.'
Midget does such a good job with the way Ennis and Junior are building bridges. Or, at least trying to! Just jump in, that's the way to go!
I hope they can all celebrate Christmas together.
mariez:
--- Quote from: Penthesilea on November 14, 2007, 03:06:04 am ---...I've already read the new chapter and love the story as much as ever.
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Yep, me too, Chrissi!
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on November 14, 2007, 03:13:13 am ---Midget does such a good job with the way Ennis and Junior are building bridges. Or, at least trying to! Just jump in, that's the way to go!
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Yep, that's just one of the unique things about this story - how Ennis and Junior have to learn to know each other after so many years apart. They're so much alike, and I find their awkwardness so believable and realistically portrayed. It's nice to see that they're making progress!
Marie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on November 14, 2007, 03:13:13 am ---
I hope they can all celebrate Christmas together.
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??? :-\
Just realized. They celebrated Christmas already.... Maybe midget meant New Year's Eve??
I need to reread the last chapter, which is not a bad thing of course! LOL
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on November 14, 2007, 02:27:26 pm --- ??? :-\
Just realized. They celebrated Christmas already.... Maybe midget meant New Year's Eve??
I need to reread the last chapter, which is not a bad thing of course! LOL
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Yeah, I didn't catch that the first time through either :) - but somebody pointed it out in their comment! That shouldn't be too hard to correct. I should probably re-read the last few chapters. too. I'm sure there's a lot of stuff I've forgotten!
Marie
belbbmfan:
Update! :)
http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/1698361.html#cutid1
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