**SPOILERS**
LOVELY update, as always, a joy to wake up to
I loved the reference to Lagniappe's and it's brown-eyed owner (that's just so sexy!)
I also really loved the part with Jack, Ennis and June.
I love June
and I love the way you write her, Mandy
I'm pretty sure she knows what's going on now! She's not stupid!
Aw, I really do hope Ennis will go along to the zoo next time, I felt bad for poor Jack
I do love Ennis for wishing he'd told Jack he loves bears though, that was real sweet
I absolutely adored the late night visit from Jack; everything about it was sweet, hot and sexy to me. You wrote all of that SO well; loved Jack's slow easy smile,
loved him saying all he wanted was to see Ennis,
loved Ennis kissing Jack's wrist (so lovely..)
and I LOVE how you had Ennis asking.....oh wow...
These lines were wonderful:
“Hey,” Jack whispered. He turned Ennis’ face back to his. “It’s all right. You ain’t gotta be afraid to ask me nothin’.”The sex was gorgeous, so sweet, slow and loving.
Bottom!Ennis is totally sexy!! This just about killed me dead:
“Right there, huh?” he said *fans self*
Your closing lines were beautiful.
Just so lovely.
The last thing he felt before drifting off was Jack’s breath hot on the back of his neck and the pulse of his heart beating securely against Ennis’ back. Such a wonderful story, I really LOVE it, Mandy