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Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
MaineWriter:
Cristine,
Thinking of you and sending healing energy...
Hugs,
Leslie
haunted_by_bbm:
NEW CHAPTER POSTING
“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part 5B (Sequel to “Pine Creek”)
Hello everyone. Great big hugs and kisses to Leslie, Marie, Janice and absolutely everyone over on the ‘Drabblefest’ thread. :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
So sorry I couldn’t contact anyone sooner to let you know how I was doing.
I was on a strict ‘no computer’ order from my doctor for two weeks.
Today was the first day I could actually sit at my desk for any length of time.
Missed you guys. :-*
http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/6079.html#cutid1 - Part 5B
(Finally, Ennis' dream) ;)
Comments more than welcome and appreciated!
Thank you!
Cristine
'haunted'
mariez:
Cristine!!! :) :) :)
I'm so happy to see you, honey!!! You've been on my mind and I hope you felt everyone's prayers and good vibes being sent your way!! I actually did some re-reads of some of your chapters last night - I was missing your story so much.
You've been missed, too!
I know what I'll be reading later tonight!
Wonderful to have you back.
Talk to ya soon!
Hugs,
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 29, 2007, 06:31:27 pm ---Cristine!!! :) :) :)
I'm so happy to see you, honey!!! You've been on my mind and I hope you felt everyone's prayers and good vibes being sent your way!! I actually did some re-reads of some of your chapters last night - I was missing your story so much.
You've been missed, too!
I know what I'll be reading later tonight!
Wonderful to have you back.
Talk to ya soon!
Hugs,
Marie
--- End quote ---
Ahhh, Marie, it's so good to 'see' you. :)
I have been feeling the love, even in my absence.
On-line friendships can be so warm and refreshing.
LOL You mention 're-reads.' So, I'm gonna mention something to you. lol
I hope Part 5A was part of your 're-read' session, ;),
because I changed it just a little.
Maybe not enough to be noticeable to some,
but you're pretty detail oriented, as am I. lol
I changed around several major paragraphs,
and added about another 500 words total to the piece.
It really needed a tweak to work the way I wanted it to work
in conjunction with Part 5B.
I realize now, after the fact, that I was already really sick when I posted 5A.
My mind was a little fuzzy. When I went back a few days later and re-read it, I cringed. lol
I think it flows better now overall...but then again,
because my chapters are so long, no one else may notice the difference.
Just wanted to make sure you knew.
You are such a sweetie. :)
Cristine :)
Brown Eyes:
Hey Cristine!
Great to see you back online! Hope all is well.
:-*
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