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The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
ifyoucantfixit:
--- Quote from: Lucise on February 02, 2007, 05:10:27 pm ---Cheers Scott .. here is the pic.. :)
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Elegant,,,your work is elegant,,as always..
janice
mariez:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on February 02, 2007, 02:26:18 pm ---
.... Before he knew it he saw the beautiful pair of red spiked heels as he opened his eyes....So the Devil really does wear Prada..
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So clever and so funny!
--- Quote from: Lucise on February 02, 2007, 03:52:13 pm ---This is based on a little poem I wrote a while back .. called:
Through a boy's eyes
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So beautifully written and so hard to read - as really fine writing sometimes is. And your artwork is unbelievable!
Thank you, all.
Marie
Brokeback_Dev:
--- Quote from: Lucise on February 02, 2007, 03:52:13 pm ---This is based on a little poem I wrote a while back .. called:
Through a boy's eyes
He lay there all through the night
Lifeless and sagging in that little ditch.
Dried blood stuck to his many wounds
It was like a bad dream, a horrid sight ..
A little boy barely passed the age of nine
Stood there and took in the sight, the stench.
He felt his old man's hand grip his neck
His heart raced, as chills descended his spine.
That little boy grew up to be a young man
Yet some nights when he'd shut his eyes to sleep
He'd see that shell of a body decaying in the ditch
Abandoned and forgotten on that barren piece of land.
He didn't think he'd ever forget what his old man had said:
"Son, see the ol' fool lying there? He was a disgustin' queer ..
Destined for hell fire .. his death is less painful than what awaits him .."
Ennis shuddered as he recalled the words, tears flowing quietly as he lay in bed ..
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http://www.the-trades.com/article.php?id=5179
--- Quote from: Lucise on February 02, 2007, 05:10:27 pm ---Cheers Scott .. here is the pic.. :)
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this beautiful poetry milli. the pic is a perfect match..
Lumière:
Cheers June, Janice, Marie and Dev. :)
I'll have to find time tomorrow to go back to page one of this thread and read all the drabbles!
This is great! :)
MaineWriter:
Such great drabbles, I am loving the variety and creativity that everyone is expressing!
For today, try these on for size:
* kleenex
* mystery
* grocery store or grocery shopping
I have work until about 1 pm, so I won't be posting my contribution until the afternoon. Have fun!
Leslie
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