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Another Side of the Story by marlb42 (aileb)

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mariez:
Hey, Marl

Poor Cassie again. That line  -“Just once “she said very softly, almost to herself. “Just once someone should tell me before that they are gonna leave.” - was just so sad.  She must feel so rejected, even though it's not Sam's fault.  Cassie's trying to fill up all those empty places inside her and trying to make sure she doesn't get hurt again - but, of course, she's just making herself more unhappy even if she can't admit it to herself. I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to learn about Cliff.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks,
Marie

fernly:
Marl,
Just read your story, and wanted to say how very much I liked it. For all Cassie's flamboyance when we first see her in the movie, that was just surface, and you really get that across, telling her story from her point of view. She's such a gentle, hopeful soul. Very believable. I'm really looking forward to more.
Fern

Cameron:
Hi,

Thank you for your kind words, Marie, Geri and Fern, thank you all so much.  I apprieciate it so much.

I wanted to let you know that Chapter 9 is up.

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/5340.html

I hope you enjoy it.

Thank You Again,

Marl

(Right now its mixed in by date with my other story on LJ. I guess I will have to get another account and repost, unless there is some day to sort by title, not the date, but I wanted to get it posted since it has been awhile. Sorry about that)

Cameron:
Hi,

I have Chapter 10 done on this.

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/5426.html


Marl

mariez:
Hey, Marl -

Glad to see an update! 

SPOILER

Well, I guess I learned about Cliff.   >:(  I'm glad Cassie ran into Mr. Allen - sometimes just a few encouraging words from someone we trust and respect can be life-changing. 

But the ending left me feeling leery:

Cassie didn’t plan on going with anyone new any time soon.  She didn't plan on it despite how much she still wanted to.

Hmm... well, we know what can happen to plans.  You've got a great handle on Cassie, Marl.  Looking forward to more!

Thanks,
Marie

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