Hey, Marl
SPOILER
This latest chapter is wonderful. Ennis's desire, confusion, thoughts of Alma, Cassie and, of course, Jack - very well done. These last sentences, though -
Ennis sat there for a long, long time, holding the postcard, staring at the picture of the mountain, hoping somehow that it would turn into the picture of Jack.
But there was no picture of Jack and no sky blue eyes looking directly into his soul. There was no one softly whispering “it's alright, it’s alright” to him, no one whispering to him now at all.
- are awesome.
Thanks,
Marie