Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235471 times)

Offline LauraGigs

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2380 on: December 09, 2006, 12:56:23 pm »
He rang Laureen, he had to know,
Her voice was cold, her emotions did not show,
It wasn't a mistake, he'd never see his Jack again.
He lost his lover, he lost his friend,
The one he had fallen for so long ago.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2381 on: December 09, 2006, 12:57:55 pm »
Jack chose a low-startle-point mare

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2382 on: December 09, 2006, 06:11:23 pm »
Jack chose a low-startle-point mare
Impress that blond cowboy, the one so fair.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2383 on: December 09, 2006, 07:43:12 pm »
Jack chose a low-startle-point mare
Impress that blond cowboy, the one so fair.
He was used to ridin' at rodeo meets,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2384 on: December 10, 2006, 07:05:44 pm »
Jack chose a low-startle-point mare
Impress that blond cowboy, the one so fair.
He was used to ridin' at rodeo meets,
dreamed of similar motion between the sheets,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2385 on: December 10, 2006, 07:25:50 pm »
Jack chose a low-startle-point mare
Impress that blond cowboy, the one so fair.
He was used to ridin' at rodeo meets,
dreamed of similar motion between the sheets,
Take his hand in his, if he dare.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2386 on: December 10, 2006, 07:30:26 pm »
A syrupy, lovey-dovey one ..  ;D


Dear Jack, my lover, my precious, my sweet


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2387 on: December 10, 2006, 07:43:00 pm »
Dear Jack, my lover, my precious, my sweet,
you make my heart race. Feel the beat!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2388 on: December 10, 2006, 09:38:40 pm »
Dear Jack, my lover, my precious, my sweet,
you make my heart race. Feel the beat!
To feel your lips, press hard on mine,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2389 on: December 10, 2006, 09:40:25 pm »
Dear Jack, my lover, my precious, my sweet,
you make my heart race. Feel the beat!
To feel your lips, press hard on mine,
You and me as one, just one more time.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.