Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235186 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2440 on: December 17, 2006, 03:06:10 pm »
One wife knew something of the games of her man,
For a long time she still loved him, remained his fan.
Till lack of fulfillment barraged its way through,
So another life, she sought to persue,
and into Monroe's waiting arms she ran.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2441 on: December 17, 2006, 06:02:16 pm »
She stood at the door, and watched them embrace,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2442 on: December 19, 2006, 04:30:39 pm »
She stood at the door, and watched them embrace,
then turned and retraced her steps in a daze

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2443 on: December 19, 2006, 04:33:54 pm »
She stood at the door, and watched them embrace,
then turned and retraced her steps in a daze
Truth blasted open, never suspected,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2444 on: December 19, 2006, 05:03:57 pm »
She stood at the door, and watched them embrace,
then turned and retraced her steps in a daze
Truth blasted open, never suspected,
And they didnt know, they were being detected,
Their kisses and hands all over their face.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2445 on: December 20, 2006, 03:04:34 am »
It had been four years, he picked out a card.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2446 on: December 20, 2006, 10:26:16 am »
It had been four years, he picked out a card.
He had sought Ennis everywhere, high and low, long and hard,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2447 on: December 20, 2006, 04:01:22 pm »
It had been four years, he picked out a card.
He had sought Ennis everywhere, high and low, long and hard
"This has been overdue", he wrote all excited

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2448 on: December 20, 2006, 04:30:11 pm »
It had been four years, he picked out a card.
He had sought Ennis everywhere, high and low, long and hard
"This has been overdue", he wrote all excited
"Be through on the 24th." he read, hardly able to stay righted.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2449 on: December 21, 2006, 01:59:37 pm »
It had been four years, he picked out a card.
He had sought Ennis everywhere, high and low, long and hard
"This has been overdue", he wrote all excited
"Be through on the 24th." he read, hardly able to stay righted.
He knew his excitement, he would need to hide and guard.


The day seemed long, as he paced 'cross the room,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection