Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3236225 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2490 on: January 07, 2007, 04:35:33 pm »
"You waitin' on a matin' call", she said to Jack,
He looked her over, charm and beauty she didn't lack
They danced, but his thoughts were of some other time
He remembered two young guys in their prime
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2491 on: January 07, 2007, 05:37:25 pm »
"You waitin' on a matin' call", she said to Jack,
He looked her over, charm and beauty she didn't lack
They danced, but his thoughts were of some other time
He remembered two young guys in there prime
But, to hell with it, He aint in no mood to look back.


In the back seat of the car, she was "moving so fast"
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2492 on: January 07, 2007, 05:43:04 pm »
In the back seat of the car, she was moving so fast
Jack was worried a bit about how long he would last... 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2493 on: January 10, 2007, 01:03:35 am »
In the back seat of the car, she was moving so fast
Jack was worried a bit about how long he would last... 
She was all over him like she was in heat,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2494 on: January 10, 2007, 03:30:54 am »
In the back seat of the car, she was moving so fast
Jack was worried a bit about how long he would last... 
She was all over him like she was in heat,
Wanted him there and then, down on the seat,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2495 on: January 10, 2007, 04:55:39 am »
In the back seat of the car, she was moving so fast
Jack was worried a bit about how long he would last
She was all over him like she was in heat,
Wanted him there and then, down on the seat,
But his eyes got blurry, and out he passed...

 :P

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2496 on: January 10, 2007, 07:00:19 pm »
One morning he woke up and was married to Lureen

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2497 on: January 10, 2007, 07:25:11 pm »
One morning he woke up and was married to Lureen
He told himself, "She's the prettiest I've ever seen.."
Although all he could see was Ennis' face.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2498 on: January 10, 2007, 10:28:01 pm »
One morning he woke up and was married to Lureen
He told himself, "She's the prettiest I've ever seen.."
Although all he could see was Ennis' face.
And instead of denim, he felt lace,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2499 on: January 11, 2007, 04:09:57 am »
One morning he woke up and was married to Lureen
He told himself, "She's the prettiest I've ever seen.."
Although all he could see was Ennis' face
And instead of denim, he felt lace.
How he wished he was again nineteen!

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