Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235421 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2530 on: January 21, 2007, 03:56:19 pm »
'I now pronounce you man and wife', the minister said
Ennis couldn't think straight, he was feeling so bad.
He thought of Jack with a tear in his eye


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2531 on: January 22, 2007, 11:35:10 am »
'I now pronounce you man and wife', the minister said
Ennis couldn't think straight, he was feeling so bad.
He thought of Jack with a tear in his eye
And now with Alma, to live a lie,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2532 on: January 22, 2007, 06:31:37 pm »
'I now pronounce you man and wife', the minister said
Ennis couldn't think straight, he was feeling so bad.
He thought of Jack with a tear in his eye
And now with Alma, to live a lie,
'I gotta forget him,' he thought, 'Gotta look ahead' ...


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Alma hated the way he flipped her in bed


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2533 on: January 22, 2007, 11:58:36 pm »
Alma hated the way he flipped her in bed
Him looking at the back of her head
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2534 on: January 23, 2007, 01:09:39 pm »
Alma hated the way he flipped her in bed
Him looking at the back of her head
Before Jack came to visit, she hadn't a clue

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2535 on: January 23, 2007, 06:33:20 pm »
Alma hated the way he flipped her in bed
Him looking at the back of her head
Before Jack came to visit, she hadn't a clue
That Ennis' 'fishing trip' was long overdue.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2536 on: January 24, 2007, 04:35:28 pm »
Alma hated the way he flipped her in bed
Him looking at the back of her head
Before Jack came to visit, she hadn't a clue
That Ennis' 'fishing trip' was long overdue,
And right then began a life full of dread.

 :-\

Perk things up abit .. :)


Jack slammed Ennis against the motel door


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2537 on: January 24, 2007, 06:26:01 pm »
Jack slammed Ennis against the motel door
Four long years he had waited for more

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2538 on: January 24, 2007, 06:29:28 pm »
Jack slammed Ennis against the motel door
Four long years he had waited for more,
His heart hammered hard in his chest


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2539 on: January 24, 2007, 06:35:19 pm »
Jack slammed Ennis against the motel door
Four long years he had waited for more,
His heart hammered hard in his chest
His thoughts were on lovin', no time for rest,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection