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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE!~~ =Director's Instruction= **ASIDE** ((MOVEMENT)) %%THOUG
« Reply #3080 on: October 18, 2006, 07:39:28 pm »





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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE!~~ =Director's Instruction= **ASIDE** ((MOVEMENT)) %%THOUG
« Reply #3081 on: October 18, 2006, 07:42:50 pm »
<< Kissing Ennis has left Jack hard and aching. >>


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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE!~~ =Director's Instruction= **ASIDE** ((MOVEMENT)) %%THOUG
« Reply #3082 on: October 18, 2006, 07:45:45 pm »


<< Jack can hardly stand to see Ennis walk away, to be parted for even for a minute. >>

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3083 on: October 18, 2006, 08:14:02 pm »
(( Jack goes upstairs to meet Alma. ))


.......but thinks %%

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3084 on: October 18, 2006, 08:14:53 pm »
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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3085 on: October 18, 2006, 08:26:34 pm »
(( Jack hears a familiar noise , , , ))



  You gotta kid?


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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3086 on: October 18, 2006, 08:35:06 pm »
((  Jack's shaking hand grazed Ennis's hand, electrical current snapped between them.  ))



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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3087 on: October 18, 2006, 08:37:37 pm »
(( Jack is trembling like a run-out horse ))


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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3088 on: October 19, 2006, 11:53:00 am »
((  Jack's shaking hand grazed Ennis's hand, electrical current snapped between them.  ))



ALMA~

((Alma notices Jacks hand touching Ennis's and remembers something she seen in a magazine))



%% I wish I could get a better look at their hands%%


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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #3089 on: October 19, 2006, 05:59:09 pm »
ENNIS:

Yeah, two little girls... you?


« Last Edit: October 19, 2006, 06:03:38 pm by louisev »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”