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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4550 on: September 16, 2007, 04:58:42 pm »


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((  Vacillates, as before, between giving in to Jack's loving ministrations — or punching him the hell out.  ))

JACK:

%% Nice to know we're still in a relationship, hunh?%%

**Will you stop bein' confused, Ennis... I mean, looky here.**

((Jack pulls out a copy of the script.))

**Says here I'm s'posed ta die. I mean, who writes this stuff? It's downright depressin'. Well I agreed to do this story, so I thought we could get away from all that psychological mumbo-jumbo fer a while and jest... ya know... be ourselves.  Ya know, like we was up on Brokenarsed.**

((Jack pauses for a moment))

**Is it jest me, or is my English gettin' worse?... Maybe its cause a the flashback thing. Can do strange things to yer head, ya know. These flashbacks, I mean. Well you bein' there all sudsy and naked and hard, I mean solid... its doin' strange things to my head too.  Just didn' realize it was gonna leave me speechless...

((Jack pauses for another moment, thinking about what he just said.))

**Ah hell, Ennis. I can't even be speechless right.... I'm gonna just shut up now, and kiss you. And if you insist on punchin' me, then you better get yer dukes up.**
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4551 on: September 16, 2007, 05:40:33 pm »
RABID RANDY RANDOM  RAPT AUDIENCE MEMBER AKA ROCK EXTRA


((Sighs dreamily))

**This rocks! Rock on!**

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4552 on: September 17, 2007, 09:06:39 pm »
ENNIS
 
((  Finally relaxes in Jack's arms, giving in fully to the embrace.  Mouth open and soft — accepting Jack's deep kiss and everything along with it — a full exchange of every feeling, every emotion.  Reaches inside the parka to wrap his arms around Jack, reveling in the warm comfort*.  Lets his legs fall open to welcome Jack on top of him. ))
 
 
 
 
 
*not to mention Jack's newly smooth, hairless upper lip.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4553 on: September 17, 2007, 11:27:19 pm »
JACK

((With Ennis's youthful, relaxed body beneath him, Jack can only melt completely against him, snuggling closer to his body and pulling his arms tighter around. Jack's lips are glued to Ennis's and he can't help but move his lower lip ever so gently against him. The warm cushion of Ennis's mouth softly appealing to touch and taste.))

((Suddenly a thought pops into Jack's mind and he opens his eyes for a brief moment, but doesn't pull away.))

**Mmm mm-mmm, mmm mm-mmm mm mm.**
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Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4554 on: September 20, 2007, 12:05:46 am »
ENNIS [whispering between deep sighs and soft moans]:

Ya know, my offer still stands, cowboy.  Anything you want, Jack.
Anything.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4555 on: September 23, 2007, 07:47:29 pm »
JACK

((In the few short gasps for air in their embrace, Jack is able to mumble out his earlier request which had been muffled by lips crushing down on his.))

**Don't forget... yer s'pposed ta hum.**

((Without much thought beyond that, Jack leans his head against Ennis's neck and shoulder, closes his eyes, and lets himself drift off to another time and place, caring for nothing except for the awareness that he was wrapped in the arms of the most beautiful being he had ever laid lies on. One who he could tell loved him, but had so much difficulty expressing it.))
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Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4556 on: September 24, 2007, 01:32:54 am »
ENNIS [initially surprised at Jack's brazenness]:

Um, you mean that — uhh — special kind of hum I sometimes do down on you when I'm drunk?

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4557 on: September 24, 2007, 02:07:01 am »
ENNIS [realizing what Jack is referring to]:

((  Smiles.  ))  Oh, yeah.   


((  Rocks a little in the sparklight.  Breath coming slow and quiet.
Closes his eyes, and lets himself drift off to another time and place — concerned with nothing except providing a warm, steady heartbeat for his little darlin to lean against.  ))

Mmm mm-mmm, mmm mm-mmm mm mm.

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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4558 on: September 25, 2007, 10:52:49 am »
Meanwhile, back at the production tower...

((Laurel Sparta is lost in a deep meditative communion with the producer, but finally looks up, disturbed by the wild pecking at her window. The sound editor Diablo squawks loudly.))

Laurel Sparts:

**Yes...? Oh, I got lost in my thoughts for a moment. I....**

((Laurel listens to Diablo's high pitched squawking for a moment, apparently able to make sense of it.))

**They didn't!!!**

((She rushes to the balcony and overlooks the production lot herself.  She booms out in a terrible voice.))

**TO YOUR STATIONS, GENTLEMEN. THE NEXT SCENE WILL BEGIN SHORTLY.**
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Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
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Re: ~~THE PERFORMANCE THREAD~~ **aside** ((action)) %%thought%%
« Reply #4559 on: September 28, 2007, 02:01:40 pm »
OVERZEALOUS MAKE-UP ARTIST

((grabs up another fake Jack moustache and quickly paints glue on it, ready to apply to Jack's rejuvenated face and age it by several years once again.))
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.