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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #130 on: February 05, 2007, 11:26:06 am »
Thanks for updateing Mandy, great story, I'm still realing from todays revelations to Lureen.  Not sure yet how I feel about that...I'll get back to you.  ??? but no worries it's all good!

No problem Dottie, LOL

Seriously though, don't feel bad about telling me something felt wrong... I don't bite and would love to hear it.  :)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #131 on: February 05, 2007, 11:30:42 am »
I'm actually quite glad he was brutally honest with Lureen, painful as it may be for both of them. I think you wrote that SO well, Mandy.
Wish Jack could lay off the drugs and the booze and just be able to feel a bit happier. I worry about him and wish things would start looking up for him a bit. Loved how Ennis was just there for him as a friend  :)

Thanks, Mandy  :-*

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #132 on: February 05, 2007, 11:33:50 am »
thanks, June!  :-*

Don't worry, I don't plan on letting him get carried away with the alcohol, I think that this chapter is going to be a turning point for him but in that moment he just didn't quite know how to deal with losing his best friend and wife possibly baby in the same day. He won't wallow in it, like TLBoH Jack tended to do.
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #133 on: February 05, 2007, 11:37:03 am »
thanks, June!  :-*

Don't worry, I don't plan on letting him get carried away with the alcohol, I think that this chapter is going to be a turning point for him but in that moment he just didn't quite know how to deal with losing his best friend and wife possibly baby in the same day. He won't wallow in it, like TLBoH Jack tended to do.

That's good to hear, Mandy, cause he pretty much hit rock bottom in this chapter.

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #134 on: February 05, 2007, 02:44:15 pm »
I loved the writing of Lureen in this chapter. Just with that line 'He's a homophobic pig' you added a whole new layer of complexity to her.
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #135 on: February 06, 2007, 12:06:35 am »
I enjoyed this chapter, Mandy.

Leslie.

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #136 on: February 06, 2007, 12:09:15 am »
Thanks, Leslie! don't worry, I'm getting back to your email... I just haven't had a chance yet. I've been running around all day and just popping on line occasionally.
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #137 on: February 06, 2007, 12:14:01 am »
Mandy - you know how insecure I am, don't you!! LOL Thanks for the note.  ;)

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #138 on: February 06, 2007, 03:58:26 am »
came across a painting by a prominent gay artist Mandy that reminded me so much of JBLaY.  His name is MIchael Breyette.

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Re: Just By Looking at You, Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #139 on: February 06, 2007, 10:01:21 am »
Oh ~ I like that painting! Think it's really sexy!