Author Topic: The Only Thing That's Real, by littleguitar  (Read 16078 times)

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #30 on: March 05, 2007, 10:31:39 am »
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LOVELY update, as always, a joy to wake up to  :)

I loved the reference to Lagniappe's and it's brown-eyed owner (that's just so sexy!) 
I also really loved the part with Jack, Ennis and June.  :) I love June   :)   and I love the way you write her, Mandy  :)  I'm pretty sure she knows what's going on now! She's not stupid!  :D  Aw, I really do hope Ennis will go along to the zoo next time, I felt bad for poor Jack  :(   I do love Ennis for wishing he'd told Jack he loves bears though, that was real sweet  :)
I absolutely adored the late night visit from Jack; everything about it was sweet, hot and sexy to me.  You wrote all of that SO well; loved Jack's slow easy smile,  :)  loved him saying all he wanted was to see Ennis,  :)  loved Ennis kissing Jack's wrist (so lovely..)  :)  and I LOVE how you had Ennis asking.....oh wow...
These lines were wonderful:

“Hey,” Jack whispered. He turned Ennis’ face back to his. “It’s all right. You ain’t gotta be afraid to ask me nothin’.”

The sex was gorgeous, so sweet, slow and loving.  :)  Bottom!Ennis is totally sexy!! This just about killed me dead:

“Right there, huh?” he said    *fans self*

Your closing lines were beautiful.  :)  Just so lovely.   :)

The last thing he felt before drifting off was Jack’s breath hot on the back of his neck and the pulse of his heart beating securely against Ennis’ back. 

Such a wonderful story, I really LOVE it, Mandy  :-*   
 
 

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #31 on: March 05, 2007, 04:42:01 pm »
Yup yup yup Mandy, I'm digging this one. I really like this Jack-he is pushy and bugsome and real. Not all sunshine and rainbows. Just what Ennis needs-someone with no boundaries but I suspect that could cause some tension down the line.

Is it wrong of me to ask when we'll be getting an update on JBLaY?  ;)

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #32 on: March 05, 2007, 06:43:36 pm »
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Is it wrong of me to ask when we'll be getting an update on JBLaY? 

Hopefully tonight!  :)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #33 on: March 05, 2007, 06:48:45 pm »
Hopefully tonight!  :)

Squeeeeeee! but.....your tonight is my goodnight  :'( Well something to look forward to when I wake up!  :-*

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #34 on: March 05, 2007, 07:12:19 pm »
Well, it's with the beta right now, so depending on how quickly she gets done, it could be up soon. She's usually really fast. Though, I didn't give her much warning that it was coming today, so we'll see!
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 6 up!
« Reply #35 on: March 07, 2007, 11:27:22 pm »
The Only Thing That's Real, Chapter 7  :D

http://minchout.livejournal.com/23204.html

comments and con crit always welcome and much appreciated.
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 7 up!
« Reply #36 on: March 09, 2007, 02:59:49 am »
I just got all caught up Mandy. Thank You, thank you, thank you for this wonderful story.  I love the dialogue between E & J and I LOVED the last line of Chapter  7.  How perfect and just the right place for it!  More Please.
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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 8 up!
« Reply #37 on: March 15, 2007, 11:24:57 pm »
For anyone following this wonderful story...Chapter 8 is up and it's lovely  :D

http://minchout.livejournal.com/23739.html
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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 7 up!
« Reply #38 on: March 20, 2007, 06:08:55 pm »
Chapter 9!  Great story, great chapter.

http://minchout.livejournal.com/24478.html#cutid1


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Re: The Only Thing That's Real, chapter 10 up!
« Reply #39 on: April 07, 2007, 04:59:43 pm »
This is late, but, I've posted chapter 10  ;D

http://minchout.livejournal.com/25514.html


Chapter 11 should be up Monday.
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73