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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 17, 2006, 10:12:39 pm ---I am glad you are enjoying it, Jo - what about the rest of you readers, now that you have had a taste of Ellery's point or view of sizing up a 40-something ranch hand in Bill's apartment, to finding excuses to keep him in Laramie long enough to charm the pants off him...?
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Hi Louise,
I left you a few comments on LJ - but let me add again how wonderful it is to get an "Ellery's-eye-view" of his initial meeting and first day with Ennis. I just love (as we all do) Ellery's "voice" - and who wouldn't - he is, among many other things - vastly entertaining! I could listen to his wit, his sarcasm, and his cut-through-the-B.S. attitude all day! And I just love, love, love that he is trying to getting Ennis to smile (and succeeding)!!! That is something that I didn't realize when reading TC.
Looking forward to reading more!
Thanks - Marie
louisev:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 18, 2006, 08:41:36 am ---Yes I referred to that in my comment on Louise's LJ. Ellery later told Ennis that when he shut down the conversation about Jack's death he heard a growl in his voice which went right through him.
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dang, i missed the perfect opportunity for him to be wound up! I should have gone back and reviewed my previous thoughts before writing that part!
P.S. I am backtracking slightly on that.
notBastet:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 18, 2006, 01:08:22 pm ---dang, i missed the perfect opportunity for him to be wound up! I should have gone back and reviewed my previous thoughts before writing that part!
P.S. I am backtracking slightly on that.
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does that mean there will be an updated version for us to read?
louisev:
no, i didnt actually change the text. I backtracked ... well, you'll see in the next section.
notBastet:
Okay!
;D
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