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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #100 on: January 11, 2008, 03:06:12 pm »
he sure does hate interruptions!

It would quite possibly mean the answering machine being chucked out the window if Lauren phoned again at a delicate moment!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #101 on: January 11, 2008, 03:17:04 pm »
Speaking of delicate moments Louise, are our boys going to be having one of those any time soon? I mean what better way to relax eh? Sex is a great stress reliever, and as Ellery is highly stressed, he,s going to need a lot of it lol. :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #102 on: January 11, 2008, 03:20:44 pm »
hahahaha, well the weekend IS coming up so...

COULD BE!!!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #103 on: January 11, 2008, 03:22:51 pm »
Ahhhhh so it is!! Well then I reckon that a WHOLE weekend in bed with Colson, purely for medical reasons you understand, ;) is just what the doc ordered, don,t you?   :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #104 on: January 12, 2008, 09:02:16 pm »
ah hahahaha


well ladies i Hope this was worth the wait!  I can't wait to see the looks on your faces after reading THIS chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242510.html  "Chapter 23"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #105 on: January 12, 2008, 09:51:08 pm »
ah hahahaha


well ladies i Hope this was worth the wait!  I can't wait to see the looks on your faces after reading THIS chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242510.html  "Chapter 23"


SPOILERS

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!

Louise, I've spent the entire day crying because my cat died this morning.  I didn't think it was possible that anything could make me smile today, let alone laugh.  But I was wrong.  Thanks, Louise.  I really needed that.   :-*

Marie

P.S.  Oh yeah, the look on my face? - Something like  :o   How do you come up with this stuff? 
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #106 on: January 12, 2008, 10:30:26 pm »
oh you poor dear. I guess that chapter was well timed to cheer you up!!!!

And the answer is... I started writing the chapter and Ellery was going on about queers in movies and I thought... uh oh, something is going to happen.

and then... it did.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #107 on: January 13, 2008, 01:23:46 am »
 :o :o :o :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Hee-hee is Jeremy gonna get an eyeful?? I know he will be hearing an earful from Ellery! Definitely not water cooler conversation on Monday morning at the station!!! Something else Wes does not need ta know!!

Now Jeremy may need to invest in a nice soft gag for Nick's mouth!! Love that he wanted to go see & lmao at the image of Colson opening the door & seeing Nick there with Jeremy! Yep-Jeremy would be deader than dead for real!!

So much for a relaxing Friday nite for Ellery!! (Maybe he can try one of his meditations while waiting to be released from bondage!!)

Priceless Louise-just priceless!!
You're the love of my life
And the breath in my prayers
Take my hand, lead me there

I can't forget the taste of your mouth
From your lips the heavens pour out
I can't forget when we are one
With you alone I am free

~~Santana~~Love of My Life

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #108 on: January 13, 2008, 01:50:36 am »
now see you are just filling my mind up with naughty ideas!!!   shame on you!

.... and stay tuned!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #109 on: January 13, 2008, 02:02:55 am »
oh I am pretty sure you need no help with doing naughty-but OMG the possibilities you have given yourself here!!!

You bet that I will be checking back often for your next update!!

Still lmao here picturing the look on Ellery's face when he realized Colson wasn't teasing about the cuffs not coming off!!!


Marie-so sorry about your kitty!!! (losing a pet is like losing a child.) Hope you feel better!! Hugs!!
You're the love of my life
And the breath in my prayers
Take my hand, lead me there

I can't forget the taste of your mouth
From your lips the heavens pour out
I can't forget when we are one
With you alone I am free

~~Santana~~Love of My Life