New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie

[mariez]

I'm going to ponder a bit about your question as to the next story, Louise....

Ahhh... I see you've just posted a new chapter....so I'm off to read!  Are we at Chapter 35 already? Thanks!

Marie

[souxi]

Well fi you can,t write the honeymoon story yet....
Then how about some more Jeremy and Nick going on a vaction together somewhere? Or Simon and Laureen? ( I can,t remember if you,ve done them already). To be honest with you, even something as seemingly mundane as Colson and Ellerys every day lives is just lovely, with a few naughty bits thrown in of course. 
Whatever you want to write is fine by us, but don,t leave the honeymoon toooooooo long. I have glorious visions of Ellery, (Hugh Jackman,  ) in the tinest pair of denim shorts. *sigh*.
And the thought of rubbing suntan lotion on those thighs.................

[belbbmfan]

and here is chapter 35!

 http://louisev.livejournal.com/245665.html

Aaahhhh, I love it when all is well in Tourmaline. Haircombing, hmmmmm 

Thanks Louise!

[louisev]

thanks for the ideas... I am still working on the present story but I will give the honeymoon story a think. It would certainly be ... different!!

[louisev]

and here is chapter 36 at a record hour of the morning!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/245884.html

[belbbmfan]

and here is chapter 36 at a record hour of the morning!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/245884.html

SPOILER



“You ain’t gonna lay on no tropical beach buck naked! Not when I’m around.”

  Owww, come on now Colson, don't be a bad sport!

I'm glad he agree to the vacation Louise. It really is what they need.

And I had to read the first part twice. At first I thougt Wes was actually in the room,  or that it was a dream or something... phew! Glad it was just a phone call! 

[louisev]

whoops that wasnt clear was it? hahaha!

[mariez]

SPOILERS

... At first I thougt Wes was actually in the room,  ...

LOL!  Poor Wes is having a hard enough time with the visions in his mind! 


I'm glad Colson agreed to the vacation, too.  And this chapter made me nostalgic, in a good way.  Some references we haven't heard in a while: 

..Mr. Please an Thank You..

".. I told ya I didn’t want ta go retire ta some fantasy ranch.”

And, of course, my personal favorite:

“Them ones you can see all the way ta France?...    

And, yes, Colson did learn from the best, didn't he? 

Thanks,
Marie

[souxi]

and here is chapter 36 at a record hour of the morning!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/245884.html

Now reading this has cheered me up no end. I wonder what visions poor Wes had going through his mind lol. Is it my imagination or are our boys getting more "mushy" lately? Well good I like it. I think we could all do with some mush right now. Thanks Louise.
xxx

[louisev]

and here is an early Sunday update:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/246321.html  "Chapter 38"