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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #290 on: February 04, 2008, 09:52:42 am »
Bonus chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/249522.html  "Chapter 48"

I go to bed early, mourning the Patriots and look what I missed! Ack!

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #291 on: February 04, 2008, 12:46:41 pm »
well if it is any consolation to you readers on the edge of your seats, I have NO IDEA what is going to happen next!

But it sure feels like it's time to dolly back and refocus the cameras on Friday night with Lance back on the job at the Red Stallion!

(of course, Souxi might come after me with a pair of handcuffs if I do!)
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #292 on: February 04, 2008, 01:01:02 pm »
well if it is any consolation to you readers on the edge of your seats, I have NO IDEA what is going to happen next!

But it sure feels like it's time to dolly back and refocus the cameras on Friday night with Lance back on the job at the Red Stallion!

(of course, Souxi might come after me with a pair of handcuffs if I do!)

Hahahaha. Handcuffs acccompanied by begging/pleading and moaning, THEN the REd Stallion. :laugh: Poor Ellery needs something to take his mind off of snooty drawers, and Colson is just the man to do it lol.  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #293 on: February 04, 2008, 09:39:33 pm »
okay Souxi, just what you asked for!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/249600.html  'Chapter 49'
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #294 on: February 05, 2008, 06:29:08 am »
okay Souxi, just what you asked for!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/249600.html  'Chapter 49'

Ahhhhh now that,s better. Ellery begging is just what I like to hear lol.  :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #295 on: February 05, 2008, 08:32:21 am »
okay Souxi, just what you asked for!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/249600.html  'Chapter 49'


SPOILERS



Gotta love Mr. Coyote! 

“Aw, Colson come on, I was just gettin relaxed.”

“An I’m just gettin a boner, so this’ll work out perfect,” ....


LOL! Good to start the day with a laugh.  Hope we get to hear Ellery's "confession" under oath handcuffs.  This is some great roll you're on, Louise!

Thanks,
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #296 on: February 05, 2008, 09:24:27 am »

SPOILERS



Gotta love Mr. Coyote! 

“Aw, Colson come on, I was just gettin relaxed.”

“An I’m just gettin a boner, so this’ll work out perfect,” ....


LOL! Good to start the day with a laugh.  Hope we get to hear Ellery's "confession" under oath handcuffs.  This is some great roll you're on, Louise!

Thanks,
Marie

Yes Marie great idea!! Make him confess whilst restrained with the handcuffs, then if he refuses to tell him anything, he gets more errrrrm  "torture" excellent idea lol.
pssst Louise, just make sure Colson has to "force" the truth out of him.  :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #297 on: February 05, 2008, 01:35:37 pm »
you are just merciless, Souxi - I swear!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #298 on: February 05, 2008, 02:04:19 pm »
you are just merciless, Souxi - I swear!

Hahaha I sure am. I,m going to look forward to reading the "torture scene" tomorow morning lol.  :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #299 on: February 05, 2008, 02:12:27 pm »
unfortunately for you and all of the other folks who seem to be swarming around to read the past week or so, I have to go to a dinner for work tonight. I am hoping to get something written tonight but you might have to hold your breath!!!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”