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Offline mariez

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #30 on: December 20, 2007, 02:20:22 pm »
Quote from: frantic65 on December 19, 2007, 06:28:12 pm
I don't know about anyone else, but I am officially naughty enough now to fill in the blanks myself!  ;)

 :laugh: OMG, that's hilarious, Fran - and so true!  Who'd a thunk it?


Quote from: louise van hine on December 19, 2007, 07:29:58 pm
well, I'm not doing away with a lot of the explicit scenes lightly... it mainly has to do with maintaining the tone of the story, and I find that the tone changes a lot when there is an intimate scene, which works well sometimes but doesn't work as well when it"s more frequent!

at least that is how it feels to me.

Yes, I can see that, Louise -  I understand what you're saying.  :)

Marie
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #31 on: December 20, 2007, 02:36:19 pm »
SPOILERS




Nice seeing everyone playing nice with each other! Now we can make some real progress. The problem in dealing with a bunch of lying snakes is that they're all ........lying snakes  - who'd sell their own mother out if they had the chance.  It'll be interesting to see what Leon has to say now!  Great job, Louise!

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #32 on: December 20, 2007, 02:46:12 pm »
you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...

that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #33 on: December 20, 2007, 04:50:32 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on December 20, 2007, 02:46:12 pm
you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...

that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!

That's not a problem Louise. Just as long as it takes lots and lots and lots of chapters to find out!  :)  :)
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #34 on: December 20, 2007, 05:20:44 pm »
well frankly, Fabienne...

it just might!
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #35 on: December 20, 2007, 05:50:21 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on December 20, 2007, 02:46:12 pm
you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...

that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!

As if that would discourage me from reading!! I'm sure Ellery will be happy to let you know what's up-there's no way he could keep his mouth shut for long!
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #36 on: December 20, 2007, 05:52:16 pm »
as soon as Ellery figures it out he is bound to start talking about it, I am sure!  In the meantime he might need to relax at home with some Clint Eastwood movies and his and Colson's favorite pastime, which is NOT baking biscuits.
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #37 on: December 20, 2007, 09:47:24 pm »
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #38 on: December 20, 2007, 11:14:22 pm »
SPOILER for Chapter 7








 :( :( :(  Ellery-do not mess around with high blood pressure & be 100% straight with your man or there will be hell to pay!! 

           
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #39 on: December 21, 2007, 01:48:20 pm »
SPOILER







Uh Oh - dizziness is not a good thing.  But it did get Ellery to the doctor tout de suite, so maybe he needed that physical manifestation of his high blood pressure in order for him to take it as seriously as he needs to.  And our newly promoted Detective Sweet Thing will get a chance to do some of that investigating that he's so good at.  Daddy Grey will be home soon and I'm betting a nice brisk walk is in Ellery's very near future. 

I'm having a great time with this story, Louise!  Thanks.

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