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A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #140 on: May 09, 2006, 11:42:47 am »
What is this? Two chapters in two days? Let's just call it Christmas in May from your pal MaineWriter.

Here's the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/12/

Please, please, please--comments, feedback! It is what keeps me going. Post here and please consider a writing a review at the fanfic site. Thanks in advance...I love hearing from my readers!

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #141 on: May 09, 2006, 11:43:31 am »
What is this? Two chapters in two days? Let's just call it Christmas in May from your pal MaineWriter.

Here's the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/12/

Please, please, please--comments, feedback! It is what keeps me going. Post here and please consider a writing a review at the fanfic site. Thanks in advance...I love hearing from my readers!

Leslie
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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #142 on: May 09, 2006, 11:52:21 am »
Awsome Leslie! I can't wait! Now that school is winding down I won't be reading it at 3 in the morning right before I go to bed, so I'll leave feedback this time!  ;D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #143 on: May 09, 2006, 11:54:15 am »
What is this? Two chapters in two days? Let's just call it Christmas in May from your pal MaineWriter.


You are spoiling us ;D.  Be careful what you got yourself into ;).
Will read later and post my reviews.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #144 on: May 09, 2006, 12:16:06 pm »
Thanks Leslie!

         That one made me cry.  From happiness of course!     :)

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #145 on: May 09, 2006, 12:16:35 pm »
Cheers Leslie!
I was planning on reading CH 10 tonight, I'll just read both!
I promise to send in feedback after that.  :-*


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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #146 on: May 09, 2006, 12:19:42 pm »
Thanks Leslie!

         That one made me cry.  From happiness of course!     :)

David

David,
You must be a fast reader  :) Go back and read it slowly. Savor every word--I worked hard on those words! Tell me your favorite line. Here's one of mine, "If only you knew, he thought to himself."

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #147 on: May 09, 2006, 02:08:16 pm »
"How can something be bad when it makes my daddy so happy"

Oh trust me Leslie, I savored every word!      Of course it was hard to read near the end thru my tears of happiness.

Keep up the great work!    I can't wait for Chapter 12!

PS:   Am I the only one who visualizes the story with Heath and Jake as they appear when Jack drives up ?  Jack with his sideburns yet no silly pornstache yet.   LOL

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #148 on: May 09, 2006, 02:35:54 pm »

PS:   Am I the only one who visualizes the story with Heath and Jake as they appear when Jack drives up ?  Jack with his sideburns yet no silly pornstache yet.   LOL

That's the way I picture them...that age, 33 years old  each. Jack's slimming down, now, and looking good. I'd like to think those silly sideburns have been shaved off although I haven't explicitly written that.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 11
« Reply #149 on: May 09, 2006, 02:47:59 pm »
That's the way I picture them...that age, 33 years old  each. Jack's slimming down, now, and looking good. I'd like to think those silly sideburns have been shaved off although I haven't explicitly written that.

Leslie
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We didn't think those sideburns or pornstaches were so silly back then. Some of us still think they're hot. ...  ;)

A sweet chapter, Sweetheart!

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