Since I did not put the review up for chapter 10, I will put them together.
Chapter 10 is “
Smooth”
The character development is smooth. I actually just finished another fanfic (Somebody New) and switched to this chapter. Other than the different story lines, I didn’t feel there is a big difference in the characters. They were all based on the characters in the story/movie, but matured over time in fanfics from the story/movie version of the characters, particular Ennis.
Jack and Lureen’s conversation was pretty smooth.
Smooth transition to the proposal of buying Lazy L. Looks like our beloved characters get to stay in Texas after all.
Chapter 11 is “
Happy” Very happy indeed.
I am…
Happy that Jack took care of Ennis from the attire, the car, to where to stay, and what to do, to make sure that Ennis looked good and proper in the whole picking up girls deal.
Happy that Ennis stood up against his old fears, and decided he can not live on his life by what others think
Happy that the whole sleeping arrangement was not an issue after all the discussions.
Happy that Ennis and Junior had the talk. Didn’t realize that Junior was only 12. She was a very mature girl.
Happy that Junior was so sweet to Jack.
“Make sure you leave time for other activities.” The line cracks me up; I can not believe Ennis said that.
