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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 18
« Reply #270 on: June 09, 2006, 02:13:29 pm »
As always, you never disappoint us Leslie!       ;)

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 18
« Reply #271 on: June 10, 2006, 07:02:13 pm »
Beautiful, Leslie, tearful and and beautiful.

Wish I could say more, not yet. But I will.

xxxxxxx
John
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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 18
« Reply #272 on: June 10, 2006, 08:31:49 pm »
Beautiful, Leslie, tearful and and beautiful.

Wish I could say more, not yet. But I will.

xxxxxxx
John
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John, just so you know...you were a huge inspiration for this chapter. Way back when, you made a comment to me, "I worry about Hal, a life of sorrow and regret..." I have held that thought and figured it out in this chapter. I would like to think that Hal's life was not entirely unhappy (viz, the people showing up at the house and the funeral...he has friends)...and I managed to transfer the bulk of unhappiness and regret to Pete....still, poor Hal, missing a life that could have been...

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A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 19
« Reply #273 on: June 12, 2006, 06:11:52 am »
Happy Monday morning, everyone...

To get your week off to a good start, a new chapter is posted for your reading pleasure. This one has some juicy stuff and some big news. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/20/

Comments and feedback are always welcome. Consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks, always, for your support of my writing.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #274 on: June 12, 2006, 06:14:00 am »
Happy Monday morning, everyone...

To get your week off to a good start, a new chapter is posted for your reading pleasure. This one has some juicy stuff and some big news. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/20/

Comments and feedback are always welcome. Consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks, always, for your support of my writing.

Leslie
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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #275 on: June 12, 2006, 07:24:53 am »
Leslie, this letter posting is long overdue... ;)

A big, warm and heartfelt Thank You!!! for every single chapter of your story.

I'm an avid reader of your fanfic and look forward to every new chapter. Though it took me 2 attempts to appreciate it. First time, I read only the first and half of the second chapter and stopped (sorry!). I did not think it was bad (no way!) it was just - different. I guess it took me a while to get used to the thought of a different universe of Ennis and Jack.
But a few weeks later, at my second time it got me hooked and I spent half a night in front of the computer, reading all 13 (by then) chapters.
Since then you can count me in to the folks who are impatiently waiting for every new chapter.
Great story.


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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 19
« Reply #276 on: June 12, 2006, 07:48:20 am »
Good Morning Leslie!

    Absolutely Loved it!   Best chapter yet!
     ;D

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #277 on: June 12, 2006, 08:24:41 am »
Happy Monday morning, everyone...

To get your week off to a good start, a new chapter is posted for your reading pleasure. This one has some juicy stuff and some big news. Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/20/

Comments and feedback are always welcome. Consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks, always, for your support of my writing.

Leslie
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Jesus Leslie you wernt kidding about the juicy stuff!! :o :o :o You have SOME imagination Lady. ;)  The big news was brillaint, absolutly brilliant.  Bought a tear to my eye. Now if only the powers that be could do a re-make with your stories instead.  Wonder what rating it would get?  ;) ;) ;) ;)  Keep em coming,(no pun intended sorry lol) :)
Always and forever. J&E.xx

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 19
« Reply #278 on: June 12, 2006, 09:36:56 am »
Good Morning Leslie!

    Absolutely Loved it!   Best chapter yet!
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Thank you, David!

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 19
« Reply #279 on: June 12, 2006, 09:39:01 am »
oh goody! what a great way to start the morning!! Definitely better than the yoga class I'm about to go to...  :-\

Thanks Leslie!!
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

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