Chapter 7, a great pleasure as always--it's so much fun seeing them interact with others, since most of their meetings are completely private! Can't wait to see Ennis teaching Bobby to ride...
I wrote what I thought was something important over on the fanfiction board. This is the gist of it:
It had better NOT be obvious to EVERYONE that they are crazy about eachother if this story is going to continue with both of them alive for a while! Hal is of course an exception, --but his reaction, too, I think, should have been somewhat tempered : just looking at your faces, it's easy to see yer crazy about eachother --or something like that--will NOT DO, even from another gay man!
It should be clear that Hal picks up on things that most people wouldn't..an overly contageous smile, an exchanged glance, etc.
I had an idea for a story...I think. About Lureen, and another guy she meets...dunno..whatdaya think?