You should teach a class! I’m not teasing — k seriously. Those things would be interesting and maybe I’m put off enough by my lack of interest in deep sea fishing. I did see several paragraphs toward the end that I actually circled thinking I found complex and interesting. The one about Mr. Josie’s nice face was one.
I actually did start to write a book one time. It was called
How to Read a Book (oddly that name was not taken). I use a method that pays particular attention to things like colors, names, weather, etc. The idea is that a writer chooses these things for a reason.
So, this is clearly a Christian allegory, as there are many references, starting with "Mr. Josie", the boat owner and mentor of the author. He chastises the police who are like the money lenders in the temple, and keeps a book of promises to provide fish for the community. He even tells the author to go take a shower. Baptism? And later pours salt water on him as he holds the fishing pole and line. Mr. Josie has a deal for "Cap": lay off the womanizing, follow me, and I will give you riches and big fish. Recognizing this, the author follows all of his instructions dutifully and becomes like his apostle.
Of course, the parallels of the police to our own time are eerily abundant. In fact, the story caused me to reflect that the U.S. is now a Third World country.