I commented on your journal too to part six and want to post it here too
I never thought I could love GH more than the last time but I do!
This was a seriously beautiful chapter and must have been pretty intense to write. You are so spot on with everything; you *so* get Jack and Ennis. Everything is always so right and detailed. I can just see everything so clearly the way you write it And Ennis really is a farmer to me; you make that work and I find your detailed descriptions of life on a farm extremely interesting. I feel Ennis really loves it, really cares for the animals and that's just wonderful
I loved Jack offering to help with the cows or make breakfast even though he was half dead! LOL So adorable
And Jack kissing Ennis's fingers like that! Omg....*faints*
These lines were so beautiful and gentle *SIGH*
Jack was asleep when Ennis climbed in beside him, lying on his side with an arm tucked up under his chin, his breathing slow and steady. Ennis lay on his back staring into the dark, the heat from Jack's body almost burning his skin, above him the gentling swish of the wind in the eaves and the first birds of the morning beginning their chorus as he closed his eyes, and drifted into his second sleep of the year.Awwwww and tea in bed! How cute is that??! And Ennis blushing! Awwwww *hugs Ennis* And Jack so likes to tease him!!! You wrote that so lovingly
I love the little star Ennis bought
Loved Jack collecting the eggs
And Barry, hmmmmm he intrigues me! He may be weird but I find him very interesting, all that stuff about the horses....
I loved these lines, sweet and so wonderful
"I think I'll maybe need a snack in the meantime." He brought his forehead against Ennis's, gently pressed their noses together. "I like you a lot, Ennis. You. Not where we are or what we do."Their talk in the kitchen was wonderful and I'm glad they had it, just getting to know each other a bit better. I loved Ennis cooking, loved Jack dipping his finger into the bowl! Cute! And I loved these lines:
"I came here to see you, Ennis, and if you want to go out we'll go out, but I'm really just happy to be sitting here with you, being with you. It doesn't really matter to me what we do."Sweet and beautiful H
I feel for Ennis's confusion and how he worries about Jack not liking it there or that he can hardly believe Jack likes him
Loved these lines, so much:
As he rested his head in his hands, he felt Jack shift across the sofa and wrap an arm round his shoulders. "It's alright, Ennis, it's alright." Jack squeezed his arm. "We can give it a try, can't we?"*SIGH* Yeah, Jack, of course you can!! and you must!!
The HOT HOT loving at the end was like nothing else H! Jesus. *feels flushed*
I want to love you, Ennis. Let me. Please." His voice a plaintive sigh against Ennis's neck.
Then their lips were together again, Ennis breathing, "Yes, yes," into Jack's mouth. Jack pulled away. "Turn over, Ennis, turn over." Whispers pulsing round the room as Ennis's heart beat faster; turning to lie on his side, groaning as Jack bit into his neckOMG *dies* You sure know how to write hotness H!
I loved Jack leading Ennis upstairs like that, that was so beautiful
Totally loved the moonlight
And the open window and the sound of the sea
God, all of that was so damn romantic
Once again a PERFECT chapter ending to an absolutely perfect and beautiful story. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH sweetie. And you for writing it I just adore the way you're writing this; you have such a beautiful way with language
Thank you SO very very much. I can't wait for tomorrow
Oh, nearly forgot, I'd love Ennis to teach Jack how to ride
That would be just wonderful
