Mandy - you must update soon because you really left us hanging here. It surely was angsty
OMFG Jack's father
How can Jack stand staying there with Bobby? I get he has no other place to go to but if I were him I'd just sleep in the truck!
I can't wait for Ennis to arrive in Lightning Flat.
I left a comment on your LJ 
I know, sorry! I don't typically like cliffhangers either, but I sure do leave you with some angst. It's funny, originally I had Jack's section first in that chapter but I thought that maybe it might make Jack's section a little easier to read if y'all knew Ennis was on his way, guess it didn't work

Anyway, update should be seriously soon. I had this great scene all written in my head for the next chapter, but I was in my car at the time... so I'm hoping it will come back to me!
I AM reading Bill Bryson's "A short history of nearly everything"
I've heard that's good! Now, if only I could stop reading fan fiction...