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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 9 up!
« Reply #70 on: October 21, 2006, 05:19:43 pm »
I know I know! Sorry, it isn't up yet... I said it would be up yesterday because I thought I had a half day but wound up working all day and into the night  :-\ I got home a bit ago and I'm in the middle of writing it right now but I'm kind of stuck on a scene... so it may not be up until tomorrow. Tonight if I get my act together.

I really am sorry, I meant to have it up thursday even before I told you guys I would... 
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 9 up!
« Reply #71 on: October 21, 2006, 05:21:22 pm »
S'Alright, s'alright. Just looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it gets posted.
Leslie

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 9 up!
« Reply #72 on: October 23, 2006, 06:07:03 pm »
Finally, Chapter 10  :D

http://minchout.livejournal.com/tag/that+little+bit+of+hope

Seriously sorry for the wait... blame Jack's mom and dad, I got kind of stuck on a scene... to tell you the truth I'm still not entirely happy with it, but let be I guess!

Enjoy!
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 10 up!
« Reply #73 on: October 23, 2006, 06:24:52 pm »
Whoooooohooooo!!

OMG - I'm just blown away by all these great updates today!

I don't know if your update will be great, Mandy! I still have to read it!!!  ;D

Just kidding, you know that, right?  ;D  :-*

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 10 up!
« Reply #74 on: October 23, 2006, 10:25:54 pm »
Whoooooohooooo!!

OMG - I'm just blown away by all these great updates today!

I don't know if your update will be great, Mandy! I still have to read it!!!  ;D

Just kidding, you know that, right?  ;D  :-*

of course  ;)

There were so many good ones today... they'll keep me busy tonight for sure! Now, if only we had a Shades update.... a girl can dream can't she?
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Ch. 10 up!
« Reply #75 on: October 26, 2006, 11:54:06 pm »
Chapter 11  :D

Please don't kill me... angst in this one to say the least  :-\

http://minchout.livejournal.com/8775.html#cutid1
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, New chapter up!
« Reply #76 on: October 28, 2006, 10:14:54 pm »
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 12!
« Reply #77 on: October 28, 2006, 10:54:18 pm »
A great song Leslie (coffeecat33) sent me that she said she thought of while reading Ch. 11... I think it works really well for Jack in general  :)

Echo And The Bunnymen
Nothing Lasts Forever
 
I want it now I want it now not
the promises of what tomorrow brings
I need to live in dreams today
I'm tired of the song that sorrow sings
I want more than I can get just
trying to trying to trying to forget
I walk to you through winds of fire
and never let you know the way I feel
Under skin is where I hide love
that always gets me on my knees
I want more than I can get just
trying to trying to trying to forget
Nothing ever lasts forever nothing ever lasts
forever nothing ever lasts
forever nothing ever lasts forever
I want it now I want it now don’t
tell me that my ship is coming in
Nothing comes to those who wait
times running out before you're running in
I want more than I can get just
trying to trying to trying to forget
Nothing ever lasts forever nothing ever lasts
forever nothing ever lasts
forever nothing ever lasts forever
All the Shadows and the fields are coming to you
all the Shadows and
the fields are coming to you
All the Shadows and the
fields are coming to you
 
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‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 12!
« Reply #78 on: October 29, 2006, 08:47:58 pm »
more angst after two chapters of pleasure...you're killin me littleguitar!  I sure do hope things end up happy for your boys otherwise why read fan fiction?  Sorry, not to insult anyone, just how I feel.  If I'm going to read FF it's to get more of the back story or to have a better outcome...know what I mean?  Anyway I'm hooked on your story and waiting anxiously for that next Chapter.  Keep up the good work.
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Re: That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 12!
« Reply #79 on: October 30, 2006, 01:36:39 am »
more angst after two chapters of pleasure...you're killin me littleguitar!  I sure do hope things end up happy for your boys otherwise why read fan fiction?  Sorry, not to insult anyone, just how I feel.  If I'm going to read FF it's to get more of the back story or to have a better outcome...know what I mean?  Anyway I'm hooked on your story and waiting anxiously for that next Chapter.  Keep up the good work.

Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!

I know what you mean about wanting a happy ending for our boys. And, though I have nothing planned out yet, it is my intention to give them that happy ending. I set out writing this to get them together for good and plan on keeping it that way, no matter how many chapters it takes me  ;)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73